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BloodQuill


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Sylva and BloodQuill have come to Ponyville to move in with her cousin, Twilight Sparkle, for a change from Canterlot, but moving to a new town with new ponies with strange personalities can be hard to cope with. When BloodQuill has trouble settling in, help might come from in most unexpected form. When a crisis comes along and the elements are needed, Twilight is captured and it's down to her inexperienced cousin to save the day.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 14 )

Hmm. Not bad. Tracking.

EDIT: Now that I actually read it, it is very good =D

not as bad as i thought it would be.
i was expecting a mary-sue twilight clone.

you have some spelling errors, notably
"BloodQuill new Spike"

and you need to put an indentation at the beginning of paragraphs

Seems interesting, compared to what I originally thought was a mary-sue Twilight.
Tracked.:twilightsmile:

375368 yes I made the brilliant mistake of not revising it at all before I published it... :facehoof:

Haha everyone was expecting Mary-Sue Twilight clones :unsuresweetie: DUDE seriously though you're doing pretty good.
(BTW this is Inky why are you not watching me yet XD)

390446 Ink, why are you calling yourself chickenscratch..? haha thanks :moustache:

390488 Ink Swirl is already taken, and Chickenscratch is a cool name. Don't hate :moustache:

I'm sure it is :rainbowlaugh:

Blood Quill WHERE IS THE REST :raritydespair: WHERE.

so what happened to the rest of the chapter?

524409 Who knows :facehoof: I'll try to get her to fix that today.

I'm sooooorry guys I have a huge school thing D:

Oops my computer was being weird so instead of typing soon it said oon and saved it :/

Ok FINALLY it's short but it's a chapter! I promise I'll make a long one next time ok?

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