• Member Since 21st Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Aug 21st, 2012

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The mark of a Hoofington Post investigative journalist
1. Planning ahead
2. Being Resourceful
3. Doing whatever it takes
4. Always having a plan B

Categories: Humor, Mystery

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 3 )

Seems like an interesting concept. A couple things to work on though would be your grammar and the tense of the story. More than once you switch back and forward between past and present. I'll track it to see where it goes :twilightsmile:

;A; I wanted to see what happened to Twilight! :flutterrage: But besides that, It's really good so far! I can't wait for more! :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::pinkiesmile::heart:

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I'll see what I can do with that. Thanks for pointing out. I might try to work on that over the week though :twilightblush:.

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