Dr. Edward Richthofen, Nikolai Belenski, Takeo Misaki, and Tank Dempsy go into a teleporter in Der Kino der untoten and after an incident by your favorite drunk Russian the 4 travel to the land of equestrian as ponies they must now befriend the ponies reintroduce element 115 and get back home but will they want to leave their new found friends and return back to their universe filled with zombies and no life? Will Richthofen ever be cured of his zombie fettish? Will Nikolai finally be sober? Will tank still be the all american bad ass he was in this new colorful world? Will Takeo bring Dishonor to his family? Find out in this comically relieving story of our lovable crazies and a few new surprises (all characters not listed)
Chapters (12)
This needs to be longer to keep the readers attention. Also to get more readers, because I usually see that very short stories don't get very much attention and is usually dislike. I just telling you.
3768314 well as i said it is my first story and i have only so many ideas pop into my head at once its hard to extend a story when you have all these other ideas you want to get out as well
I love it! Keep it up bro!
Well, I love so keep doing your best!
3768327 I'm writing my own story that is my first. I don't have an editor and reread and rewrote most of it, but I know this because I read others people fic. Most fic I read help me when I wrote my chapters for The Stranded Four. I also notices that very shorts fics aren't very much liked. Either from it being very short or uninteresting. Only a very few of them, but that's rare. Look at other writers stories to give a good definition on how many words should be uses. The bare minimum is 1000, most tics keeps theirs around a thousand to two or three thousands. But some go beyond that number. I'm not saying your fic is bad it just needs a little improvement and then your golden.
Ich mag das , es ist sehr gut. Hoffe, dass sie mehr hinzufugen konnen.
3768517 oh, so sprechen Sie Deutsch wissen Sie, ich kann es sprechen auch sehr gut habe ich gelernt, es in meinem Sprachkurs
3768553 Ich nur ein Anfanger
3768634 Bei einer Rede in Deutsch?
3768683 I'm tired of speaking German and tired of translating. No I didn't mean that.
3768700 oh i see but to anyone whos wondering chapter 4 is out and its longet than the others
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Bring us more of the good stuff or I'll get as agressive as Nikolai without vodka.
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By the way, you should take some time fixing the grammar. It's a good story, but please fix it. Keep up the good work.
3777223 I'll get to it like i said before this is my first story so ill edit all the chapters once i get to 10 it may take about a week with school and all so you all will get some more of my mini chapters (usually explaining the setting and what is going on) But for now i will continue chapter 5 like i said i promised it would come out today and it would be 2k words at least
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Gentlemen, tonight we feast, for Universum Der Ponies has heard our pleas!!!
Imagine if one of the giant robots from Origins wound up in Equestria?
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That would be fucking awesome. Or if Sammy Maxis appeared as some other pony instead of being the Demonic Announcer.
I love the story and i want my oc in the comic
Fanfic
3781674 are you the 115th Reader?
3781674 Also if you want your OC in the Fic you need to be more original your OC isint exactly your own idea it is a mix of twilight rainbow dash and apple jack so yeah sorry pal
I made a new oc called Rainshield Dash.
3781334 Hehe, imagine if the Staffs ended up there alongside all three robots with a few G-Strike beacons.
3785360 acutally origins takes place AFTER the events of buried, heres the jist if you chose maxis' as your path then he would go back in time to save samatha but once samatha realised what her father had done she still had the powers but went even further back in time to change the way they MEET you see at shi ni numa nikolai takeo and dempsy were all test subjects and thats where they meet eddie in THEIR time so yeah if you want origins to come into play i would have to go back and forth into universes telling the story of the Green run group
3785473 If you complete the Origins Easter Egg a certain way, it all turns out to be two children playing with toys, one called Eddie, the other Samantha. And that, ladies and gentlemen, is the Zombies timeline in a nutshell.
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I deduce that Eddie is Richtofen, and the timelines can be altered after the whole nutshell incident. Besides, as long as the characters keep their attitudes I'm fine.
3785506 well im glad you pointed that out because samatha created that universe TOO this is because she may be an all mighty powerful being but she needs a proto god if anything else fails
3788903 Sorry, I meant, Zombies in a nutshell: Ten year olds mic spamming and ruining the fun for everyone who wants to play seriously.
3789246 that feel when your paired up with a squeaker... that feel when he has shotgun rank...that feel when he is immature...that feel when his brother kicks him off only to have him be terrible...that feel when you got downed first and he went ahead and revived a different team mate who just downed...that feel when you die with the ray gun MK2
3789255 That feel when you die with the Staff of Lightning, Pack-a-Punched Raygun, and Pack-a-Punched Scorpion EVO and the ten year old proceeds to mock you for being such a loser, despite him having lead a horde too you whilst you were reloading because he wanted the raygun.
3789263 That feel when you do the buried easter egg...that feel when its going swell and your still only on round one...that feel when you have to go to round infinity...that feel when finding the switch on the bodies is impossible...that feel when you get to round 13 without getting another max ammo
3789280 That feel when you're so poor it took you over a year to gather the funds for just one DLC.
3789399 That feel when your 80$ in debt to your parents just to pay for all the DLC only to lose the one flash drive its all stored on. oh and chapter 7 is out halfway
3786812 yes eddie is Richtofen and the next zombies game will either take place in the universe with sam and eddie or right after origins since it is a new timeline. its at least not as confusing as the legend of zelda time line.
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Let alone the "Song of Storms" logic.
3799323 Really guys i need an idea for this new chapter i have had food poisoning latley and i cant think straight
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If you need help, wll let me help you on this one. How about a "some time later", and Samantha mysteriously appears here as a pony?
Vhere are ze words?
This is a good shitpost story.
Not much else than that.