Link fights but is quickly defeated by ganondorf and impaled upon the master sword and as ganondorf prepares to send him to be forever trapped in the empty void, much like link has done to ganondorf in the past, farore attempts to stop the spell but only ends up altering it and so link ends up in equestria badly wounded. I am open to suggestions and of course I welcome opinions and ways to improve my writing. THIS IS MY FIRST FAN FICTION. I also wish to thank MAGO5, appledashfan89, and gravy 1333 for help in editing my story I don't think i would have been able to do this without them!
Chapters (6)
Also Comments about ideas or what you want to see farther in this story are greatly welcome!
I'd like to see it turn into a romance
3891519 That is an interesting idea but the one question would be "between who?" because at the current moment it is Link as a Human surounded by ponies.
so does the villain look to conquer the world link was sent to after he grows board with his victory? villians always planning things and people will rebel against tyrants so rebel group looking for link?
3891529 well it's link and he always has some kind of contact with royalty soooooo ya mybe Luna or tia or hell cadence it seems like it could work
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That is not a bad idea but hey it all depends but i do have some funny plans for link and the equestrian roralty
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whoops looks like i gave a bit of it away 
Actually I have a plan to help explain how ganondorf was able to defeat link all it takes is a little dose of chaos
Also the idea of a rebel group in search of Link is not a bad one but remember Ganondorf thinks Link is dead so I doubt there will be much searching also in Ocarina of Time Princess Zelda dissapeared yet no one thought to look for her so who knows maybe Hyrule's Peasants are just mindless or at least spineless fools or at least the majority of them are.
Well I'll be waiting also just being nitpicky but I think the chapters are a bit short
3892377 Yes I feel this way too but i promise to try and make the next ones longer as I myself get more accostomed to the stories flow and the first ones were sort of rushed in an attempt to get this out there. I really wanted it out there in order to start getting solutions and critique as soon as I could but even as i send this i'm working on "Chapter 3: What the Buck?" i only have 3 paragraphs so far but it's slowly coming together.
3892410 that's cool I hope it comes together you got my like
3893164 Awesome and i thank you for it!
3893462 I know that myself and as i said to Hero of time I am working on extending the future chapters for your reading pleasure my main problem is content so suggestions for future chapters are greatly appreciated.
I just remember are you going to change him cause he would cool as a Pegasus
3897121 Welll i haven't quite decided that but even if i did he would HAVE to be a unicorn otherwise how could he weild his sword and other MAGIC weapons though it would be cool if he were a pegasus it just wouldnt be practical. but i suppose the hover boots might allow him to fly
3898721 well he could use his mouth for the sword and as for other weapons i seen fics where they use their wings as for magic pegasus have magic in them so he can just will it to work like a unicorn. and if that don't work then Alicorn time!!!
3901068 Hmm that is not a bad idea not a bad one at all especially the Alicorn one with that working there is definitly a chance for romance between link and the royalty but who knows we will see if i decide to make link a pony or keep him a human.
3901171 it's toooo short, way to short. Next chapter should be longer.
3901185 SIGH and there goes another one DOES NO ONE READ PREVIOUS COMMENTS BEFORE POSTING THEIR ONE MY GOLLY GOODNESS IF YOU HAD LOOKED YOU WOULD KNOW THAT I KNOW THIS AND I AM CURRENTLY WORKING ON IT RIGHT NOW AS YOU READ THIS SO STOP STATING THE ^#*&@!#%^@%#&!@ OBVIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!
3901193 it's really good, just mabey combine two chapters together?
3901292 that's not a bad idea sorry for losing my temper it just seems like a ton of people are commenting about story length after i already told some of them why it was like that and it makes me annoyed that i have to restate myself multiple times so yeah sorry.
3901300 there there every thing will be all better
3901833 Thanks Hero
appreciate it 
but too tell you all the truth i really hate feeling pressured and this is new to me the whole people i have never actually met face to face wanting something that only i can give it makes me feel great and nervous at the same time.
3902363 I under stand I have fanfic ideas I would love to do but I don't want to deal with the pressure your more brave then I am at writing
3902408 You know if you want we could work together and get them out there i would be happy to help
3902496 if I decide to ill give your the story idea and u can build off of it that cool?
3903082 Yeah absolutely just send it to me in a private message and I promise to say that the idea came from you!
Oh my goodness I'm not even done with chapter 3 and it is already longer than the other 2 combined (it is currently at 1,410 words according to Microsoft Word) I sure hope you all like not a whole lot is going to happen in it or at least nothing exciting it is more likely to create suspense and make you want to attack me until I get chapter 4 out
but oh well I should have it out in about a week from today if editting goes well if not then i will have it out 2 weeks from today at the most I promise
First 3 or 2 chapters were short, but this one is okay. Try to make them longer and maybe I'll like it... Depending on how the story goes.
3924209 Thanks for that i know the first ones were short and i intend to keep the others about the length of the most recent one from now on but thanks for the potential like.
3926175 GAH GOD DANGIT GRAMMAR NAZI I WARNED YOU ABOUT THIS!!!!
PREPARE TO DIE LIKE I WARNED YOU ABOUT!!!
*Goes pinkamenia mode and picks up chainsaw*
*2 hours later* ok whew alright now that i am done with all that I'm off to go fix that error!
P.S my reaction to myself -->
AGAIN WHY DID I DO THAT AGAIN
3926610 NO DONT YOU DARE YOU EVIL SWINE!!!!
IF YOU DO I SHALL DECLARE WAR UPON YOUR FACE AND FAMILY *pulls out an army and a ton of weapons from nowhere* AND BEFORE YOU ASK I WILL DO IT WITH THIS ARMY!!!
*Thinks 'oh i have an army of, goblins, robots, zombies, creepers_ a few evil witches, and a couple psycos, one or two evil clones, a couple jedi, and a few sith, oh and i got some sheikahs and zoras too, but lets not forget the gorons who can easily crush you!*
walks off a cliff still singing yet still survives and comes back with a He-Man, Master Chief, the covenant, the ark of the covenant, AND MUCH MUCH MORE!!
--> reaction still
GOD @*$^#)%&@ WHY WONT ANYONE STOP ME
3926655 i don't see any relavence between that and our conversation
3926662 you want distractions HOW ABOUT THIS ONE!!static.fjcdn.com/pictures/Jedi%2BMind%2BTricks.%2BRepost%2Bpossibly_f8a995_4256600.jpg I WILL WIN THIS!!!
3926699 LOL ok how about this one encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQCAFm5hiwTcs0u-aSBstBayI_MDxjP9Dm5_m32xfhDw8zs0ZyZ HAHA
3926732 hmm that is hard to follow and slightly insults my german side (not really) SO TAKE THIS encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRfXa4fPAwswOp6D9pb_PI0337ZkR4r3sIs0QEzKCmlJsIUIhIF5w
oh an SOMA DIS!!!! encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTj5bkVyX1QEpWcRghuBFVe_D2HliVIP0Ffwxav3WfNVsnWg9IB
WAT YOU GOTTA SAY NOW SOUN
3926773 ok well before i respond OTHER VIEWERS IGNORE THIS OR JOIN IN I DONT CARE ROFL. now back to our not really scheduled program. TAKE THIS SON!! i.chzbgr.com/maxW500/8047251712/h453B1EA3/
i dont know how it relates SO DONT ASK THEN TAKE THIS
encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSpTGgIQjN_np7JCZ-MLp_ZWN7rlBOjIFs5srDbWfoKKZvqH51f8w AND THIS hold on i messed up this one ill send it next reply WANT SOME MORE FU
3926811 HECK NO funny-pictures-blog.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/Thor-vs.-Nyan-Cat.jpg <-- first thats the replacement image now here is the new one --> troll.me/images/futurama-fry/i-see-your-silly-memes-retaliation-is-possible.jpg AND DIS cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/400x/37847538.jpg AND SOMMA DIS memecrunch.com/meme/108WY/retaliation/image.png YAY MEMES cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/250x250/45421602.jpg HAHA OBAMACARE SUCKS funny-pictures-blog.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/09/Finish-Him.jpg
3926875 SUCCESS cdn-media.hollywood.com/images/l/victory_620_080712.jpg
3926893 bet.com/news/features/vote-2012/news/politics/photos/2012/11/best-obama-victory-memes/_jcr_content/leftcol/flipbook/flipbookimage_1.flipfeature.dimg/110712-politics-best-obama-victory-memes-meme-dael-with-it.jpg TAKE DIS YOU SORE LOSER
3927059 Google it holds all the answers and pics one could ever need. I just searched for zelda pony tat or link from legend of zelda pony or just legend of zelda pony i really dont remember my exact search.
3927193 GODESSES NOOOO!! NOT NAVI I THOUGHT I GOT RID OF HER AFTER OCARINA OF TIME!!!!
3927207 THATS IT DONT YOU DARE TELL ME HOW TO SWIM OR OPEN A DOOR OR WALK OR HOW TO USE A SHEILD OR GIVE ME ANY RANDOM FREAKING QUESTIONS BOUT SONGS OR TALKING TO SARIA IN THE MIDDLE OF A BATTLE AGAIN!!!!!! or else THIS 4.bp.blogspot.com/_qD8qViAtzog/TCzjn8vqAmI/AAAAAAAAAxA/YpDcIM4TC2A/s1600/Navi___Hey_Listen_by_GENZOMAN.jpg HAHA DEATH FO U
3927229 I HATE YOU DANG IT NOW DIE 4.bp.blogspot.com/_qD8qViAtzog/TCzjn8vqAmI/AAAAAAAAAxA/YpDcIM4TC2A/s1600/Navi___Hey_Listen_by_GENZOMAN.jpg
3927371 that
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is
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3927431 thats it im done
3927449 HATE!!!!!!
For peat shake. Why it's not fair
. Tee hee. Any who good story.
3928112 ims sorry but what is not fair? Just so i know if i can fix it or not.
...... did you have a flame war with a grammar nazi?!?!?!?!?
3964645 sort of we had a massive photo war and we tied i won the first battle and during the second he annoyed me so much i could no longer continue the battle so we are tied in that battle 50/50
Oh and to everyone else who reads my story and likes it but does not read my blog posts i would like suggestions about what items link should have to use and what games they are from so i can research them. Also i am working on the story just really slowly.