So Sweet and Tasty

by Mayclore

Author's Note

This was an idea that would not go away until I wrote it down, so here it is. It's me poking fun at the opening of the infamous 'Cupcakes' fanfic, adding all of the ominousness I thought that story lacked (I hope). It was my intention to have a sort of reverse effect, causing the reader to be unsettled and then yanking the rug out from under them with a mundane, anti-climatic punchline.

Anyway, it's a nice change of pace from my other work (which is all Extremely Serious), and I hope you got a chuckle out of reading it as I did writing it.

Comments

[muter3456]

Oh thank goodness, thought this was gunna be another Cupcakes. Good Story, did just what you said in the Authers note!

[The Angry Dango of Doom]

That was hilarious! Now I need to know how she knew what paint thinner tastes like!

[Gavriel]

Dat ending.

[nemryn]

Well, I was expecting a "looks like 'Cupcakes' but it's actually not" story, so the ominousness didn't really get to me. Other than that, it worked pretty well.

[Lloxie]

I'm relieved that it's not cupcakes, but otherwise sad to say a little disappointed. Wasn't much point to this little story, you know? Lot of build up to... nothing. o.O

[pinkie pie2]

man thats awsome my reaction