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Admiral Biscuit


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A random collection of prompt-driven one-shots. Each has been lovingly hand-crafted.
The subjects are as diverse and colorful as the ponies which they describe.

New stories will be added now and then, so be sure to check back frequently.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 21 )

Even Zebras are probably afraid of something.

Saltwater taffy, as it turns out. Nopony knows why. :trixieshiftright:

This was a joy to read, very funny. Sometimes it's the prompt driven ones that are the most fun.

Only two mistakes.

watching it out of the corner of her eye.

It was worktable in the library basement

There is a word missing here, I'm not sure if it's meant to be a 'the' or an 'a'.

Over all, two hoofs up.
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--Sollace

The pony became the woman? I don't know, I need some explanation.
Make this a real story dude.

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No, she was always a human. From what I recall, Megan went to Equestria when the ponies needed her, but didn't live there.

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I second that.I must have moar! :pinkiegasp:

Aw, I want to know what happens when you push the button! :pinkiesad2:


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As do I. :raritystarry:

Who says she'll pop out of somewhere alive and well when they press the button? :pinkiegasp:

--Sollace

"She’d been put to rest the next day, and her friends and descendants came to pay their last respects, along with the five Princess of Equestria."
(Princess -> Princesses)
So was there a birth in royal family or is Shinning still around and counted in that five (Royals of Equestria)?

"I wonder, what's this red button do?" (sic)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IJNR2EpS0jw Dumb Ways to Die

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Or not so alive and well. Zombie Pinkie!

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I rejected a few dozen ideas before settling on not saying, because sometimes an author does that. Usually because he's a jerk.

However, if you're morbidly curious what image I did have in my head, feel free to embiggen this picture:
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So was there a birth in royal family or is Shinning still around and counted in that five (Royals of Equestria)?

I figured a birth, but it's up to the reader to choose. Maybe Princess Skyla, who knows?

"I wonder, what's this red button do?" (sic)

Surprised you didn't put the YouTube link for the pony version of that song.
Dumb Ways To Die (pony!)

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I now have the image of a giant, animatronic stripper popping out of the town hall in my head.

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My thought when I read that line was "Even Zebras are afraid of something, although nobody knows what, because apparently it doesn't rhyme with anything." :pinkiecrazy:

I imagine Pinkie loaded a spring in what would later become her grave, and when the button is pushed...

...And in a vault deep below Sugarcube Corner, the first in a series of cryostasis chambers hissed open. Looking around, Mirror Pool clone #1 slowly smiled. This was going to be fun!

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I have considered a short story where a pony is using the mirror pool for some sort of immortality. Said pony suddenly discovers that it's been blocked by Twilight.

"Yeah," Scootaloo added, pouring another bucket of drowsy snakes through the basement window. "Besides, Twilight loves snakes; she's even got that snake stuffy your sister made for her."

Perfect ending. Loved it. Even incorporated a semicolon!

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Perfect ending. Loved it.

Thank you!

Even incorporated a semicolon!

I love semicolons :heart:

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