Everything always happens in Ponyville, doesn't it? This time, Major Quinn Evans, a pilot for the Air Force, gets sucked into the Bermuda Triangle during a plane flight. But he is surprised to wake up in Ponyville, where he is creeped out by everypony there-- and they're just as creeped out by him.
Marked teen for mild swearing.
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Not bad...not bad at all
Truly a good start.
The only inconsistency is that the plane survived the fall.
Explosion? The plane should be just an ashy spot and hunks of metal.
The one thing I have to say, is why do people constantly pass out from seeing talking ponies. Most of the HIE stories that I have read include this.
Reminds me of the jumping off a cliff with an epic explosion at your back meme.
Again I restate my previous comment from another story.
The chapter would be longer if the person in question turned and ran, or engaged in combat.
Hmmm... Interesting Though he would've held out longer with Name rank and wait a second Age?
Thought it was Name/Rank/Serial Number?
Sorry, but airplanes don't just blow up when they get hit by lightning. The lightning strike can leave a burn mark, but even a strike on the engine won't knock the plane out of the sky like that.
The plane have a higher possibility of crashing by lightning if it from 1940s to 1960s.
If this is a modern plane of today, low chances man.
YES! Finally a new chapter! And it's GOOD!
ok kindof short and the last part all of my wut
A complete 180...
488068 Whut?
488751 Your character changed his mood completely within a short span of time.
A "180" refers to a quick and complete change to exactly to the obvious, refering to 180 degrees
489432 Oh. Well, now that you bring it up, I agree. I'm going to change the ending of Chapter Seven tomorrow.
481376 'Kay, I changed it. See if you like it now.
553761 sweet
I like the new ending much better! Glad to see the author values reader input!
lol
Why did you stop? It was so good!
I want more keep up the great work please
old but gold. one of very first fics I've ever read in the early year of the fandom.
A TALE AS OLD AS TIME