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Mr V


In case you couldn't tell, my works are often written to fill specific ... niches. I expect you will enjoy a unique and novel experience.

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Spike is far too young for her, of course.
That means they'll have to keep it their sweet little secret.

Rarity's home makes a perfect love nest,
a wonderful place for a few hours of passionate kisses and gentle caresses in the dark.

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Comments ( 82 )

Bravo, very bravo. Very nice piece and kept in character surprisingly well.

You get my thumb!

Ooo, scandalous!

Well, what can I say other than this story was made using 100% pure awesome sauce. I like how their time together isn't a booty call, rather it's the two of them enjoying each other's company in an intimate none sexual way.

leo

Este relato es sensual y relajante al mismo tiempo. Pulgar arriba como corresponde.

Very sexy. :duck: One has to wonder what the response would be if it was an adult Spike having nookie with an underage Rarity though.

Love can never be wrong. :raritywink: Short but nice story :)

Ahhh...this reminds me of the time an English teacher who taught at my high school was busted and fired for doing one of her students. Something about "taking advantage" of a minor. :trollestia:

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What the hell are you talking about? Pouring champagne on oneself and having your partner lick it is very sexual.

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I would call that highly sensual rather than sexual. Either way I'd say it falls under erotic.

324036 Adult Spike, underage Rarity? Think getting a hotdog into a cheerio. And for that lovely image in your head, you are welcome :trollestia:

Hmm, can't tell if want. This is a story that falls between 'cute romance' and 'full-on clopfic', so I've got some mixed feelings. Still, a well written story for one of my favorite pairings!

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you son of a bitch, made me laugh so hard.

Anyways very nice story, however in my opinion, this is cutting it pretty close to a clopfic.

Cheers,
jangledorf

324346 If I made you laugh, the Pinkie has taught me well. :trollestia:

8====== > '
Hotdog ^ ^ Cheerio

have fun :trollestia:

very very nice. if love would be placed in the pony world this would be born. i really hope you make more for does two you really have a gift for this.

Well now... this certainly is an interesting one. Exceedingly interesting in fact. Not normally the type of thing I would read... but it did catch my interest.

Fury of the Tempest fav's this story.

Wow... hot :duck:
But I have to be on the objective side here: Spike is a dragon... his growth cycle is completely at odds with pony-age.
Technically he already WAS an adult!

324365 ' 8====== >

Good enough?:trollestia:

I'll admit, I never thought of the RariSpike ship as nothing more than either one-sided on Spike's end or simple friendshipping, but you managed to make with the romance in a splendid fashion.

My upvote, V. Take it. :yay:

324993 No clue. It's simply suposed to fill your mind with varying mental images you can never un-see.

*Notices cover art*

"....Oh my. What are they..."

And then I read the story, which was sad and romantic and sexy and cute. The end.

:heart: Forbidden love.

What if :unsuresweetie: walked in? Good Story too.

That was absolutely beautiful the only bad thing i have to say is Damn this for only being a oneshot, but that's fine

I feel cold... A romantic story that chilled me, a strange absence overwhelming my consciousness. I feel strangely alone now. :raritycry::raritydespair: This story is as frozen as any 'Gore' fiction I've ever read. I'm sad and take this way too seriously..
What a useless rant. I can be such a ditz.

I like this story. There you go. :pinkiesad2:

Dude this story is so fucken awsome. let me make it simple. Spike and rarity need to be made cannon by the end of season 3. if not you will be are leader as we march to hasbro hq and ask for the ship.

Oh my god I just realize! Pinkie Pie could pop out of nowhere and anywhere!!!!!

342760 I'd support that in a heartbeat as long as Spike looked as he does in your avatar. Be a nice change to see a young, handsome lad with an attractive and mature lass.

This was wonderful, but now I have to wonder, why must this pairing technically be some sort of illegal?

If I get to Equestria I'm totally looking through all the related laws for loopholes.

Wow, Spike doing body shots with Rarity? Kinkyyyyyy! :moustache:

Well, that was.... different, to say the least. I found myself a bit disturbed whilst reading, but I couldn't stop either. It was pretty good though. I give you a 3 out of 5. :moustache::moustache::moustache::fluttercry::fluttercry:

That was so adorable! :pinkiesad2:

This story is gold thumbs up. But now I feel so lonely :fluttercry:

DF

Forbidden romance, the best romance. This was a very, very good read and I really enjoyed it.

I've read this a few times and it's a great read. But I got to ask where you got that picture for the fanfic from. It's so...'adorable'.

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Well, you probably won't find this exact image anywhere else on the internet.
Though it was exactly what I wanted for the fic, the original (from ponibooru) needed some ... edits ... before it would be appropriate.

If you know what I mean.
No no, don't try to imagine what those edits may have been.
Just enjoy it as is, everyone.

well that was a good story, and also an easy favorite (favorite shipping) :moustache::raritywink:

truly portrayed as being such a scandal. I love it haha.:ajsmug:

I may not be a fan of RarixSpike but I thoroughly enjoyed this short read. good on you.

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I gave up looking for it after 10 minutes.
So did you make that cover image for the fanfic?

325879 Rarity would have loved it since at one point she was wanting someone to come in and watch. Rarity probably would have been totally cool with traumatizing her little sister for the extra thrill. Realisticly, whe would have made sure that Sweetie was either with the CMC or at her parents place.

Wow. That was one of the steamiest fics that I have read that wasnt a full on clop. I like how you gave Rarity hidden freckles, nice little touch.



The line with the moon peaking through the blinds made me think "Luna watches you clop/fuck". That needs to be the new meme.

This Story is great! Very well written, great imagery.

I actually reminds me of a relationship I used to have. Emphasis on USED TO :fluttershysad:
It was strange, it brought back buried memories that are bittersweet.

By and by, great story

how is this rated mature? :unsuresweetie:

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It's uh ... rated teen, broham.
I'm not really sure what you mean.

"With a smirk, she lifted the bottom, spilling the foaming wine on her chest where it pooled and dripped into a long rivulet along her belly."

"– a dirty queen and her pretty little prince."

"On a small mountain of gemstones piled high in one corner of the boutique lay Rarity,"

Slaanesh approves....

Ok, I just finished. It was a thing of beauty :derpyderp1:

I kinda wish this would continue. I'd love to see what would happen if their friends, exspecialy Twilight found out about them. :twilightoops:

Haha /SS/, I get it. Very nice and sensual.

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I think I found it. It's a flash game isn't it...? And Rarity is wearing that ruby snapped gem necklace right? And Spile is laying on top of her.

497938 :raritywink:
I wonder how many people noticed.

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No, that's not it.
The artist was named "lonewolfkait"
so if you really want to find it, just search for that artist.

497938
Oh wow, I just noticed that, nice catch!
I still want the original cover image, before edits :twilightblush:

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