Several stories in one with Sweetie Belle hi-jinks and more randomness than Pinkie Pie could twitch her tail at.
That was AMAZING! I really hope you do sequels for this one, too!
3628011 That's the plan!
"Hi Sweetie Belle. How are you doing?" Sweetie Belle asked. "Oh, I'm okay." Luna replied
Might wanna fix that.
Yea make them longer :)
3628019Awesome, I can't wait!
That was FUN!
One problem with your writing. When there is diolouge, when someone new speaks, its a new paragraph.
That was AMAZING! I really hope you do sequels for this one, too!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
3628011 That's the plan!![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
Might wanna fix that.
Yea make them longer :)
3628019![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Awesome, I can't wait!
That was FUN!![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
One problem with your writing. When there is diolouge, when someone new speaks, its a new paragraph.