Twilight gets curious after hearing a tale about another world inhabited by humans. Twilight wishes to go to the human world. However, her wish becomes something she'll soon regret. Now she is permanently trapped in the Human world unless she finds help. At the moment, she begins to make life the new world as a human.
[Criticism is welcome]
[Scattered Cursing]
[Slice of Life elements]
[Use of Drugs & Alcohol]
[Dark to Slapstick Comedy]
[Changes to Story might come]
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Interesting. A tad confusing, but I like it.
dot worry. ppl are following your story they just dont want to comment, including me........wait i just commented FUCK
What.
I am confused.
Details! Details! Details!
Longcase clock? You mean a grandfather clock.
You're not that good at writing, but I'll give you a track because the story is interestesting.
This is a good concept, however, try to add some more detail. Such as appearance, movement and gestures the characters make during a conversation. this should make reading this a lot more enjoyable. i'm sure you could do a whole lot better if you put your mind to it, don't let the guy above me tell you otherwise
This was rushed.. I can tell.
I like it though.
What is this... I don't even...
They seem pretty unfazed that Twilight can't work a tv.
Why did no one ask about Spike?
I know someone who can tell Lyra all about swag.
Meh.
And suddenly, mane 6 on earth!
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And the story's dead R.I.P
i finally found this story again yay! And I forgot how much of a troll he is!
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-sob- "why?"