I love fanfictions, they are alot of the time BETTER than the show or book they're about.
A group of kids with a mission to protect equestria are all that stand against an army of monsters that appear to spawn from thin air and constantly attack. Not only that, but there are some shady characters around ponyville to keep their eyes on. Just a few monsters and some wierdos, nothing to worry about...right?
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Hey now Mister, Toby's report is not outrageous, it just how he is.
Very good so far my friend. 
I can't wait for Toby to meet the Mythbusters, but let us hope if Natalie decides to ask Toby about his story, she is careful about it.
3610038 well i've got like 100 chapters worth of key story parts in my head, but idle chit chat like the ones between applebloom and Nat, i make up on the spot, so lets just roll with it and see what happens XD cuz i have as much a clue as you do.
3610010 Thank you for the compliment, and the reason Toby's report is outrageous, is 1: he is not even a Mythbuster, and 2: half of the information is missing, and the stuff that IS there is barely informative at all.
3613440 Oh, okay. I understand now.
Oh, looks like Toby has some competition in piano playing.
Also, loved the meeting between Toby and the Mythbusters. 
3613820 thanks, and what do you think about Zero's introduction? i was trying to make him the "dark side" of the story, to be honest the dark things are my favorite to write, they're my specialty, so i'd like some feedback from someone more experienced with story writing than myself.
3613939 I liked it. Always interesting to have that dark side to every good story.
Codename: Crescendo
Theme Song: 'Schism' by Tool
3630675 Holy hell, that's perfect, first one too, damn. I was about to use Simple and clean kingdom hearts remix, i guess he will be the only character with 2 themes XD
So far I like this a lot.
Getting better with each chapter.
Also, I like the kind of big sister/little brother relationship between Natalie and Kepher. 
I can feel that Toby senses something about Zero, but he's trying to just shake it off.
Also, the Maxwell with the CMC moment was cute. 
Aw... Toby fighting myths with his musical weapon was.... just... so.... AWESOME!
I'm so proud of my OC, and I love how Natalie watched after him as she took him to her and the other mythbusters' home. 
However, I hope Fluttershy and the others will not be to upset about the stuff Toby brings back.
Like it, just hope you update more frequently.
3923386 I will try to... I've been sick for like a week, so i couldn't do anything but sleep and take my medicine, i'm all good now though, and i got nothing else to do but surf the web for the weekend...that's good for you and my other few fans.