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Pizzema Forte
You never know where the green beans are going to land.
Pizzema Forte
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Wow absolutely amazing , i loved the rhyming! 10/10 bravo!
The Mistress of Murder approves of this.
10/10 Blood drops!
This was great, the rhyming was perfect!
3595033 Awe thank you all! Your comments are so sweet. This wasn't
3594560 an easy thing to write, so I'm so happy with you guys' support.
3594303 Rhyming and rhythm comes naturally to me, though, and I love poetry. Thank you all for enjoying my little poem! It means a lot!
3595315 You are welcome sir. I shall watch from the shadows...
That was SO AMAZING.
I have never seen such a well put together poem, even if it is dark and all.
The rhyming was fantastic! :D
I approve of this story.
To quote myself:
I've never expected to see a good pseudo-Cupcakes fic ever. Can't remember the last time I did.
I wish there was more , I'm addicted to the rhyming
Anywho 5 STARS
But ,its
prettyquite impressive. For nearly scaring me into submission,you deserve 11 / 10 mustachesnever liked these things. won't down vote it though, it was fairly done. just that.............. why? if you go beyond cratoon even, they are equine. at what point would they develop some insanity that would lead them to murder each other? serial killing is a predatorial factor.
I can see why my people said I should read this. There were a few grammar errors and sometimes it seemed like you lost your rhythm, but otherwise a rather enjoyable read.
I hope you continue to write like this.
S. S.
It's hauntingly rhythmic, creepy and entertaining at the same time.
My review for this piece
is a grand one for you.
This is far from the least,
Believe me, it's true!
I enjoyed this fine tale,
It filled me with thrills!
And I really quite love
These leftover chills.
And now I for you
Give my Muffin Review-
Muffins, eight plus two
out of ten, now Adieu,
Your Most Insane.