I wish there was more , I'm addicted to the rhyming
Anywho 5 STARS

never liked these things. won't down vote it though, it was fairly done. just that.............. why? if you go beyond cratoon even, they are equine. at what point would they develop some insanity that would lead them to murder each other? serial killing is a predatorial factor.

I can see why my people said I should read this. There were a few grammar errors and sometimes it seemed like you lost your rhythm, but otherwise a rather enjoyable read.

I hope you continue to write like this.

S. S.

My review for this piece
is a grand one for you.
This is far from the least,
Believe me, it's true!

I enjoyed this fine tale,
It filled me with thrills!
And I really quite love
These leftover chills.

And now I for you
Give my Muffin Review-
Muffins, eight plus two
out of ten, now Adieu,

Your Most Insane.