Harmony and Chaos
The Draconequus and colt crouched low under the princess's gaze.
Fluttershy galloped over to the scene, she had discovered Discord was missing and had searched almost the entire market with no luck. Until she saw Spark Flyer, a pegasus colt who often bullied younger or smaller ponies, zoom into the sky while a smaller figure held onto him, drawing thin lines of blood from Spark's neck and flanks. She had realized what must have happened and galloped/flew as fast as she could. Only to find Twilight standing over the young troublemakers with a serious expression.
Discord saw Fluttershy and zipped to her side, pressing his small body tightly against her, as if Fluttershy might save him from Twilight's gaze. Most of the other fillies and colts had quietly slipped away except for two young fillies, the young unicorn who had told Twilight what had happened, Harmony Rhythm, and a pegasus who seemed to be Spark Flyer's sister, judging from their similar colouring. Harmony Rhythm had a light pink coat and light lavender-streaked with light blue mane and tail and light blue eyes. Discord liked her a bit, she seemed friendly, if a bit shy.
"Harmony Rhythm and..." Twilight trailed off as looked at the other filly expectantly.
"Ice Spark" she said.
"Harmony Rhythm and Ice Spark, you two can go." Twilight finished.
The two fillies turned and trotted off, Ice Spark spreading her wings and soaring into the sky after a quick glance at Spark Flyer. Harmony Rhythm glanced at Discord, then at Twilight, then turned and trotted away. Twilight turned her gaze back to the two young troublemakers and proceeded to launch into a long lecture that could only have been even more tedious had the princess had graphs and charts to go with it.
Finally the princess finished her lecture and dismissed the two troublemakers. Spark Flyer glared at Discord, spread his wings, and shot off into the sky like an arrow from a bow. Discord for his part, simply followed Fluttershy as they headed back to the pegasus' cottage. He was annoyed that the childish side of him had won and he was annoyed at Twilight's lecture and the alicorn herself. A lecture from Twilight was the most boring thing ever, and as the lord of chaos, Discord hated being bored. Soon,though, his thoughts took a different turn, towards Harmony Rhythm. She was pretty, he had to admit, although he knew that he would have to find a way to forget her once he turned back to his full grown form. She was only a filly and he was a couple thousand years older than her. Even he wasn't that inappropriate.
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She's cute, but not THAT cute.
Even he wasn't that inappropriate.
That made me laugh.
First don't hate you're self you have a awesome story and the shortest chapter I know is taken by Clover Skies and this story.which is another awesome story.
I should probably wait for a year so this'll have 7k words I can read....
...srsly, what's with the updating of this?! I'm not complaining, just questioning <3
4274204 Yeah...sorry. It's just that I'm nose deep in school work and stuff. Ugh, horrible excuse.
I guess I shouldn't be making excuses and just get to writing so I can get a WAY longer chapter up...
4271723 Thanks
...I don't really hate myself...at least, not too much...I hate that I can't seem to give you wonderful readers the long chapter you deserve without taking ages...
4276517 I honestly feel you, so it's a good excuse. I just don't care about school that much right now, that I can get all the random shit done... :P
4276525
I have a story to update a story that is bugging me and a promised story to wright and yet here I am doing noting...at all...all day long today.
I'm really enjoying your story right now, even though the chapters are a bit short. I have one question though, what would you think of writing the beginning for Discord when he was in the woods. I just think it would be an interesting take on the story, but it's your choice.
moar
I got to say i am liking this story :3
I like it
I think it's really sweet that Discord has a crush....
This was funny, cute and interesting.
Funny because, well, need I say why? Cute, because discord's so young now, and interesting, because I'm glad to see discord is above such things... Even at his current hieght
Well... I like the idea. But first thought Discord couldn't remember anything and has the mind of a toddler.
May I ask if this is one of your first writings? It seems to be that you are yourself unsure what happens in one chapter and sometimes disagree in your own writing (sorry my mother language is not English and I am not sure if this word fits right here though I found none thats sounds conpftable to me).
I am still looking forward at the outcome of this.
But I suggest you should write a chapater one evening and reread it another before you upload it.
I se potential in this becoming an adventurous story but don't destroy that by hurry yourself to much ;)
No "ranking on uncompleted stuff"
4637621 Dark Night knew Discord's magic was powerful and so decided to put Discord out of commission. His reason for de-aging Discord is a practical one that is not driven by revenge or anything...
update....
No new chapters?
Age is but a number...
7895238 Not when it comes to development