Oh god not another one

I'll read it

LMAO

Just a bit concerning your description: S-III's are seven feet tall. S-II's are taller by a few inches, hence why Jorge was able to lift Six off his feet in-game. More on the story later.

{{Triple Posts, Yay!}}
Now, there's the 20th century reference of "FALCON... PUNCH!!!" as well as having a musical database. Six could be more OOC than he is now, but we just don't want him to break the Fourth. Downvote, but on Read Later. Hopefully when I come back to this story, it's better than it is now, making more sense, and a bit longer. If it is, then I'll upvote.

Also, you need an editor. Bad. I'd like to offer to edit the story, if only to fix everything you screwed up. Just saying.

I actually know a large bit on Halo lore (Ima a huge halo fangirl) and I could give you help on it if u like.

3586972 It's like saying
"Oh god another my little pony episode"
I'm guessing you're one of the six downvotes?

3587615 Haha, not scum. I just prefer the Bungie Halo to 343, seeing as how they made Halo 4 WAAAY too much like CoD. There are also forty-some-odd people who agree with me, so your argument is invalid. BUT, to each their own, but you are wrong, my friend Kevin(also an ODST from Harvest like me, ) is right, and I'm left. So deal widit.

EDIT: Also, The reason I omitted the canon concerning Halo 4 in my other post is simply because this is Reach and Six we are talking about, not Requiem and Chief.

EDIT2: Also also, Parangosky's a paranoid bitch. We can all agree on that, I think.(don't tell her I said that, I work for that same bit- I mean, perfectly nice lady who won't tear me apart, hehe!)

3587263Thanks for info. I honestly pulled the six foot tall thing outta my ass. I've played all the games, yes 4 also, and I don't believe I gave the elites a position of power, just Six killing two of them, and one asking for confirmation of friendly for the ship. And the reason Jorge gave up quickly is because there is a story called MIA that follows that plot, and I didn't want to give the appearance that I copied his plot. And hopefully I can turn your down-grade around. But, I'm gonna need some help with forerunner lore, so I'll ask ya.

3587517 Forerunner lore?

3587951 Hey, no prob. Luckily, I read the Forerunner Saga by Greg Bear(good stories) so I can help there. I also read MIA, which is well written and follows Jorge well. Another thing you could do is extend the conversation between Jorge and Six a bit, but still keep Six in the position of Jorge concerning the Bomb. Just make it so that Six blackmails him into leaving...

3587615
... This is not canon, in the slightest. This is fanon. You should be ashamed to call yourself a Spartan, you brute.

"HA! I'll downvote and delete his comments! That'll prove he's wrong and not that I fear what people have to say!"

3588545 If all you have to say is that you don't like the story, then deal with it and walk away. If you have something to help the story add it, otherwise just leave it alone. Thanks for writing slowmotionstallion.

3588545 if i feared what people said, why are terminals comments still up? They were out before yours.

I'm liking this! I honestly didn't think there were many Halo stories around. So I'm happy about this one. Keep up the good work!

3590408 Look for the group "Haylo", there are a lot of 'em...

3590673 Thanks!

3588479
You're the kind of
"Idontknowwhatisgoingonbut Iwillcomment"
We're talking about Halo 4 here, which is canon.

3587937 Well it is true that some aspects of Halo 4 merge with COD like the weapon class customization, but it really doesn't bother me all that much

3591315

No, I'm the "I'vereadthisshitandstillhateandiactuallyknowwhatsgoingonsoi'llcommentandprovidemyquip" kind of guy.

it's not my fault that you're not that much of a fan to spot inequalities.

kkthxbai

3591658 Yeah, well, to each their own, I always say. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion, but there are some who just need to keep it to themselves*coughcough*CoD-fags*coughcough* Sorry just had to clear my throat. It's snowing right now!! Yippee!!!

3588545 My comments are only constructive, and I'm thinking of taking them down anyway because I'm now helping the author with his fic. You know, proofreading, editing, rinse and repeat, and overall making the story suitable for reader consumption. My official opinion of a story is not valid unless I upvote it, and I only downvoted because of the illogical happenings flying about. I repeat, My downvote is only temporary.

3589601 There also needs to be a discord Emoticon!

And have some scary adorableness:
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And now some flat-out cool-sauce:
fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/174/6/9/cortana_pony_complete_by_lone_wolfkay-d54lnzz.jpg

3591672
Tell me, which game DIDN'T have an 'inequality', and which in Halo 4 broke the game for you? You're just butthurt over multiplayer, yet there is no need to be upset. It's simply bad, so what? It's canon and the new games don't exist for you anymore? Good, it's nice to know I won't play with someone like you. Oh, and cease responding to me, please, we don't want to be blocked or reported for spamming, now do we?

3587606 nice name

3591650 How is saying 'This shitty unoriginal overused crossover is shit' saying 'This other type of shitty overused crossover is better'?

this is very good...

Well he certainly did kick ass!

3592274 It comes from an even nicer anime! You should check it out, it's called RWBY.

3592675
I might find you bloody annoying, but I'm with ya on this. Bloody crossovers bug me....not gonna downvote but I still wish to express my disdain.

Two typos in your short description, an over-abundance of commas in your long description. Not very reassuring.

3591650 Wow.

So because he is exasperated by yet another halo/equestria crossover that doesn't seem particularity good, you accuse him of being a fan of some other FPS game in a clearly derogatory manner?

So mature.

3593081 I think you need to lay off the video games and experience some real life, with real interactions with real people!

Maybe then you won't see someone not liking something you like as an insult towards you and an invitation to start a fight.

3593081 And you've lost any and all credibility with a 'don't like don't read' argument.

3593299 That's the thing with me. I'm irritating about it, but when I'm right, I'm right.

3593668
You're doing the job I'm not mean enough to do....god's speed you ugly bastard!

3593081
I think is point isn't that it's a halo crossover....just that it's a crossover....now I may be wrong, but I don't think cod was ever even mentioned.

3593862
Don't apologize to me...

3592316 I bow down to the survivor

Hmmm I'm gonna see where this goes.......

3594272 Dude, read my other comments. Then think about what you have done. Until then, sit it that cargo box with this zombie. *throws 'alive' DayZ zombie at him*

3592316 Another original?! I thought I was the only one left

Yet he wasn't concerned, he was.... looking through his iTunes
Not a single fuck was given that day

then ultimate fuck you