Despite Discord coming to Ponyville and Twilight becoming a princess, Applejack and Fluttershy are still determined to get married and start a family in this third "asexual Applejack discovers futanari Fluttershy" story.
I should mention that this one'll be six chapters long, each chapter named after a different flavor of quark. Though I'm going with the older style of nomenclature since I'd much rather have the last two chapters be "Beauty" and "Truth" than "Bottom" and "Top"...
Yeah, bottom and top would only work if you were writing the cloppy scenes you've said you won't. (But damn would they work if you were)
I think you've made the right choice there by the way. Sex scenes don't work well when using predominantly clinical terms like vulva and lacinia, and would be even worse when combined with an intentionally cute term like 'wiggler'. Changing the terms you use would be the only option, but would be out of place compared to your previous writing in this series.
I've tried to make Applejack's love of words and Fluttershy's fear of them a constant through the series, so it's AJ that really sets the clinical tone for the terminology.
Wow, Discord is such a good friend (I hope, I don't want this to be part of an evil scheme) his line about not changing a single sub atomic particle of Fluttershy was great (although a little hypocritical given he inverted her personality in the past).
And I suppose:
I should mention that this one'll be six chapters long, each chapter named after a different flavor of quark. Though I'm going with the older style of nomenclature since I'd much rather have the last two chapters be "Beauty" and "Truth" than "Bottom" and "Top"...
Mike
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So, "1-Up" was just a fringe benefit?
Oh my fucking god yes instant favorite!
Don't let anyone give you grief over your sex scenes. These are just perfect for the tone of these stories. More d'aww than unf.
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I didn't have any leeway:
With the first four, and besides "up," "down," "charm," and "strange" already work so very nicely for where I want to go with this story.
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Thanks!
Mike
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Yeah, bottom and top would only work if you were writing the cloppy scenes you've said you won't. (But damn would they work if you were)
I think you've made the right choice there by the way. Sex scenes don't work well when using predominantly clinical terms like vulva and lacinia, and would be even worse when combined with an intentionally cute term like 'wiggler'. Changing the terms you use would be the only option, but would be out of place compared to your previous writing in this series.
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Thanks!
I've tried to make Applejack's love of words and Fluttershy's fear of them a constant through the series, so it's AJ that really sets the clinical tone for the terminology.
Mike
Wow, Discord is such a good friend (I hope, I don't want this to be part of an evil scheme) his line about not changing a single sub atomic particle of Fluttershy was great (although a little hypocritical given he inverted her personality in the past).
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That's one of the things:
That makes writing Discord such fun. He's just so charmingly hypocritical...
Mike
Ha charming as always that delightful draconequus
This one find this story most entertaining