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Twilight has good plans

Twilight has good plans for winning the hearts of those she loves, but circumstances prevent her message from succeeding!

I am taking the hook from Checkmate, Chesshaver and running with it.

Chapters (3)

Twilight Sparkle has bad timing · 9th Mar 2012 · 685 words
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Twillight Sparkle has a poor understanding of pronouns · 9th Mar 2012 · 259 words
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Twilight Sparkle tries reverse psychology · 9th Mar 2012 · 121 words
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Kaldanor

Kaldanor #1 · Mar 10th, 2012 · · · Twilight Sparkle tries reverse psychology ·

This is disappointing, with a little bit more effort this could have been an amusing trollfic. Without it though, it's just there

Mad-Nug

Mad-Nug #2 · Mar 10th, 2012 · · · Twilight Sparkle tries reverse psychology ·

307041 I noticed as much myself.

FLUTTERPIEROXS

FLUTTERPIEROXS #3 · Apr 9th, 2012 · · · Twilight Sparkle tries reverse psychology ·

What is with the characterizaton here!
Oh well it could have been good.

IDigAPony

IDigAPony #4 · Jan 22nd, 2014 · · · Twilight Sparkle has bad timing ·

I laughed out loud. I'm working on this soft beautiful clumsy first love scene and I just googled "Applejack and Twilight having sex" It pointed me here. It was such literary whiplash that I just broke up laughing. With each attendee revealed I laughed harder. on Mothers Day??!!

Brilliant.

OliverHancock