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My Heart Belongs To You

Celestia is having Luna looking out for Twilight and her friends after receiving some letters, but she wasn't suppose to get involved.

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Discorded Q

Discorded Q #1 · Oct 14th, 2011 · 1 · ·

Has this been edited sir? By the looks of this English is not your first language. But the story itself is interesting. I will continue reading.

Professor Donger

Professor Donger #2 · Oct 14th, 2011 · · ·

even if it hasn't been edited this story is awesome

The Unknown Twinkie

The Unknown Twinkie #3 · Oct 15th, 2011 · 1 · ·

12689 Yes this been edited but it looked good on microsoft word so I thought that it was fine but I guess not and to tell you English is my native language, I was born in the US and I still live in the US. So please tell me what's wrong with this so I can make it better and enjoyable.

Darkus-Moon-Shine

Darkus-Moon-Shine #4 · Nov 8th, 2011 · · ·

Luna got trolled

LPPineapples

LPPineapples #5 · Nov 29th, 2011 · 1 · ·

Question are you planning to continue this story I like the way its planned out to?

FluffyPinks

FluffyPinks #6 · Jun 9th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I think that this story has potential, but it needs to be edited, and I don't exactly understand the motive of the characters in the story. It's still an amazing start to what I hope to be a new series