Royal Loyal is a unicorn at the School for Gifted Unicorns in Canterlot. Fancy Pants is a successful business pony who sees the value in education and makes regular donations to the school. One day when he stops by the school himself to drop off his contribution to the future of Equestria, he runs into a particularly unique and interesting student who catches his eye. Little does he know, she has a few friends who disapprove of her new friend and his potential intentions.
~This is a shipfic written on request by a good friend of mine. It has NOT been reviewed so there may be some grammar/spelling issues riddled through-out it. Feel free to give criticism as it is always welcome.~
Credit for images used in the title image:
-Fancy Pants Vector: Elegentmisreader
-Royal Loyal Image: Itena (sadly, I cannot seem to be able to find if she has a DA)
-Background image: Google
Stalin is amused by the story about Fancypants. Rare ocassion, indeed. Nicely paced. Good grammar. Descriptions are fine. Solid beginning. Fancypant's character is a bit off, but i am sure you shall fix that later. Good luck and keep the good work.
Also, Stalin recommends you to integrate more familliar characters into the story, it shall bring more readers.
welp, you've earned my attention.
keep writing
dun have the time to read right nao, but that blonde/dark blue pony is adorable ! did u draw her ?
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Ah, I should have given image credit. Anyways, no I did not draw her. The image of Royal Loyal was drawn by animation student Itena, I only made the originals background blank and layered it. When I get home, I'll be adding the appropriate credits for all images used.