Well, in truth, it should be as long as it has to, although I was expecting a variety of combinations among the seven of them, with the final chapter being a massive orgy or something.
3900502 Wait... I'm not too sure I want to know the answer to this, but oh well, I'm asking. If Rarity's pubic hair was purple, does that mean Rainbow's was... rainbow?
I have been waiting for this next chapter for too long, glad it's finally here/\. Great job!
Spike, lucky bastard XD
This chapter has my approval.
So the harem is off to a great start. How long before Spike bones his sister?
What is this "life" you speak of is
Only one more chapter? Aw.
Well, in truth, it should be as long as it has to, although I was expecting a variety of combinations among the seven of them, with the final chapter being a massive orgy or something.
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It's kind of a new resolution. Start any story with a given number of chapters or just a one shot.
You say your editor "had" a life? What did you do, go all Misery on him, break their legs and force them to work?
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You have no proof, you got nothing. You're nothing but a lot of talk and a badge!
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Hell yeah! Spike is such a lucky bugger
I can't wait for the Splight and mass orgy scenes
Update ?
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Spike with Rarity and Fluttershy? I wish I could give this story more thumbs up. Can't wait to see the final chapter.
3900640 He also ran away about the time when the sex started. Good chapter though.
Rarity went to his knees and waved his butt in the her
Rarity went to her knees and waved her butt in the air
There were a lot of small errors, but this one was probably the most jarring.
You right really fantastic descriptions, but you're losing something in word choice and errors
3900502 Wait... I'm not too sure I want to know the answer to this, but oh well, I'm asking. If Rarity's pubic hair was purple, does that mean Rainbow's was... rainbow?
This wasn't what I was expecting in my updates, but it sure was enjoyable nonetheless.
Nice work.
I LOVED IT TO NO END,
SPIKE FTW, FUCKING YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
10/10, YESSSSSS
3903110 Rainbow shaves
3904671 But, it mentioned, and I quote, her "perfectly groomed triangle of pubic hair".
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Whooops Got mixed up. Actually Rainbow dyes her hair. She is black underneath.
3905483 Understood. Whew!
The fact that this story manages to keep the characters more-or-less in-character, on top of being hot'n'dirty sex, makes it absolutely amazing.
I FUCKING DIED right there
ME GUSTA
Byotiful
3905483 you should do a story all about that!