That title.

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Shame there isn't more Spike than 3 sentences so far...

Hot. Uber hot. I can't wait until you continue...and I really can't wait until young Spike is involved ;)

3528711 Well, it is the first chapter, and, knowing Pax, I think he'll be involved in a big way.

I wonder when Spike gets any or at all

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Next chapter

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Pax?

This should be good. Hoping very soon though that Spike gets lucky with either Rarity or Twilight. Personally though, I'm going with Rarity.

3530399 Paxtofettel.

...I really enjoyed reading this. This is the second clop story I ever legitimately enjoyed. Normally, I read them as a personal challenge, to see if I can make it through to the end without feeling to sick to continue, but... I liked this one. I'm giving you a favorite, because I want to read the rest. You're a great author, to get me to fav a clop.

But, oh great lord and savior Amaterasu...

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What was the first, If I may ask? Also, yes: you should feel dirty. Everyone does. Even the writers. Especially the writers

just keep spike out of this or at least not make him take his dick out and i'll love this uber sexy story even more
can't wait to see rarity take it off

3530706 This one.

Spike...This might be the best thing that's going to happen in your life... though you were only cut off during the start..
but I feel that you will return...

Yay! Lookin' forward to seeing moar...cus..Dis Dokta vants moar..MOAR!!

*ahem* forgive me about that..I shall return to the darkness and await for updates.....

Sincerely,
Lime GreenSharde'

Oh crap! The story is excellently written, don't get me wrong. But I instantly visualise everything, EVERYTHING. You see what I mean?

Still gonna like and follow though

I may not read this now but the title is a recipe for Sex on the Beach.

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I'm hoping that's a positive thing.

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keep spike out of this

go die.

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Smexy. I eagerly await the return of Flutterboob.

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Harsh. Spike is a little boy in this fic. I would also probably prefer him to stay out of it. To each their own, though.

3532650 Maybe, now go do edits

You should prob describe the opening scene a little more thoroughly when it comes to Spike. Did everyone just start undressing and ogling Fluttershy while he was standing there? Did he leave at some point?

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Little boy? Oh. I thought that with it being a clpp with him tagged he'd be aged up. eh, if he isn't then no.

I wait for a fic I find interesting to update a bit.

Flutterboob? I prefer Hootershy... good story so far!

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Alright, alright.

Jeez, a little thank you hug once in a while wouldn't kill ya.

3530622 I second pretty much all of this.

“Sure thing! Nngh!” The young boy with green hair huffed and pulled as hard as he could, obediently dragging on the sand the quite large bags he was carrying. He steeled and grinded his small fangs together as he went on. Twilight sighed and rolled her eyes, twirling her fingers to envelop the bags in a magical purple hue and lifting them with little effort, causing Spike to sigh in relief and wipe the sweat from his forehead.
You mean ground. Not grinded. That's not even a word.

Pinkie pouted a little, slightly disappointed, but turned that frown upside down in less than a blink, determined to do better. She liked Pinkie too much to give her that crap, to give some false flattering especially now that her friend was showing her how much thrust she was putting in her athlete friend.
There's a rogue 'h' there. You mean trust, not thrust.

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Fixed. Thank you

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He's not that young. He's a couple of years younger than the girls. He's just a little short.

Never would have thought I would get so hooked to a clopfic, granted this is my first time reading one but still

Even with the afore mentioned instant visualisation problem

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then sex yes.

I read this during Stats class.
...
I'm glad no one was looking my direction.

Anyway, great story, can't wait to see where this goes.

3532932 ... harsh, I just gave my honest opinion, spike seems like he's much younger then the mane 6 in this and I just think it would be wrong for him to have sex with any of them (plus I just don't like sparity and I know if he does it would be with Rarity). do I really deserve that just for just speaking my mind

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...you dont even realize how much spikexharem there is on this site, do you?

Ok, this was good. I'm interested

Spike is going to be one lucky son of a bitch

Jolly good story sir, jolly good!
I can hardly wait for dat Spike harem!

Twilight and the girls went to the beach, then sex happened.

Seriously though, not bad.

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He is of legal age. It'd be wrong if he were like, 16 or worse, 12.

I very much enjoyed the story, although Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash were not the first pair that came to mind, I thought Twilight and AJ would get some of the first action

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Oh, there's still time for that. Wink, wink. Nudge, nudge.

3606504 Heeeheee hint taken

its labeled under foalcon and yet still has "teh disclaims spiek is 18 hume lolz", god i'm so tired of people copping out on this, either go all the way on it or just write another generic random adult guy mane 6 harem fic.

No offense, but man way too many people do this for an arbitrary feeling "safe" like their immediately gonna a visit from the party van, you're working with fictional characters, hell it certainly didn't stop the author of "Cupcakes" now did it?

I can probably give credit to at least trying somewhat to keep try to the fact that spike is indeed younger then the rest of the cast.

3539319 Yes and no, in a sense you're doing the same thing. Not everybody wanst to ship the same damn things you do.

Is there Spilight?

Is this story on hiatus? It just seems like you have gone a long time and still no update.

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Chapter 2 is coming in a few minutes

It’s not we’re in a hurry.”

*like

Pinkie planted her hands on Dash’s tights

*thighs

Sometimes you just have to say " screw you plot, this is what we're doing, and why we're doing it is beyond me, but we're doing it". Makes a change from all of your other Pinkie Dash stuff!

“I can’t look away, Darling! They’re hypnotizing me to do their bidding! And they want to be watched!” Rarity freaked out.