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[Future Sheep Edit: Hahahahaha WOW this is bad. I'm leaving this up just because I hate when artists of any kind delete their old stuff, but I definitely do not condone reading this.]

Twilight has something she needs to tell Rarity. How will she react? Will their friendship ever be the same?

I wrote this in the space of less than twenty-four hours, starting with waking up at about two a.m. with nothing but a one -line premise. Here's the result, something I'm actually a bit proud of.

Thanks again to andygrey for prereading (remind me to hyperlink this later) [remind me to delete the tag that tells me to hyperlink this later]

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Reminding

Edit: I'm seriously pissed at the two people who decided to downvote this. TO DOWNVOTE THE ONE STORY IN RECENTLY SUBMITTED WITH PROPER FUCKING GRAMMAR? FUCKING FIMFICTION, MAN.

I shouldn't get pissed about ratings, but I do. Wake me up when the world starts making sense again.

It was good? But a bit sudden at the end.

It should have been ditzy
Also just for the record even if they were all changelings they cannot feed off of eachother trust me I'm a doctor of everything

No offense, but I really don't get the point of this story. I also didn't find it funny at all really, but I will say it was an interesting concept though. I feel that it's just my personal preference or my sense of comedy that I don't like it, so I'm not going to down vote it. (I feel like such a jerk now. :fluttercry:)

Its kinda rushed also if that love explosion happend then why wasnt rarity and twilight blasted out of the area!? Also brainwashed? Your story is confusing my friend!:raritydespair:

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Aha! And a good question it is! Why didn't Shining Armor and Cadence's love repel the mane six and company in addition to all the other changelings in Canterlot? But, I'll answer your question with another question: What if Shining Armor and Cadence were /also/ Changelings???

See, the entire operation was a decoy, a ruse: to convince Rainbow Dash that she had nothing to fear from the changeling hive by putting on a show, as it were, a big production in which she saw the Equestrians defeat the hive, thus lulling her into a false sense of security from which the Changelings could one day strike!

It's all very obvious, really.

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