Fluffy pink cotton candy clouds have appeared across the land. Most would not feel threatened by this, but it's been happening for days. The unicorns have been blamed for their magical tinkering of the weather, but they are not responsible. So, who is? That's what three unicorns have been sent to find out. But the truth may be even worse than they expected...
Warning: Contains character death (no gore).
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I shall read this later!
Not too bad. It gives a good explanation of where Discord might have come from.
My only problem is Discord burning a pony to death and not being more randomly chaotic.
If he was a killer, he would be killing many more ponies in the past and would have just murdered all of the Mane Six in the present day Ponyville rather than playing games with them.
Instead I see Discord pulling some sort of crazy prank or joke on Quake that indirectly kills her. Like maybe turning the ground to slick soap and Quake slides over a cliff by accident.