Haha, Bravo!

That was fast.

Allow me to be your first view, possibly? That would be kind of cool.

Wait, is this another clop?

Or is this a shipping?

Already adding to my favorites.

One doesn't ask for the clop. The clop merely calls to you, and you either answer its pleas or leave it to die. You have answered the call!

Also, I'm sensing a pattern with your chapter namng schemes...

Well... You DID say you were going to make this a wet one.

And you made them get high of off each other.

Not bad. I loved it!

~Skeeter The Lurker

D'oh ho ho ho. What misadventures lay in wait, I wonder?

Well... That was goopy. :D

Wow, starting with "X needed Y sexual act" is going to be a common thread in your clops, isnt it?

3500002 I am a fan of excessive cum in both reality and with my ponies. I love the stuff. Does the story have your approval?

3500041 You know damn well I am a colt of motifs, running gags, puns, aliterations, gimmicks, and limericks.

3500120 Sure, why not.

3500120

True.

Very sexy.

Another A.J. x R.D. clopfic? Kilted, you're spoiling us.

If I had squirted in a cup drinking it down would be pretty killer right now too!

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Also, A.J. could totally use Rainbow Dash as a water gun... Or should I say a squirt gun. Yeah, I apologize for that one.

This was hawt!

Ugh... I made it through this one, but it was close. I almost had to stop reading. Good job, though. It was well-written. But, is there actually going to be a second chapter? It's marked as Incomplete.

3501229 Made it through? In a good or bad way?...

Yep! Three in fact!

3501276 Ugh... I don't know if I can take two more chapters. In answer to your question, I hate clop, but I sometimes play a game with it to see how far I can go before feeling too sick to continue. I very nearly threw up from Chapter 1. Hopefully the rest won't be as difficult.

3501538 ... Wow... that might be the most insulting thing I have ever read on one of my stories ever.

Or if I may be more blunt, you seriously might want to reconsider what you do with your time if you want to see how long you can go because clop triggers a gag relax for you.

Congratulations. You like wasting your time and torturing yourself. Please consider readjusting your life priorities. If you would truly like to be disturbed, may I interest in you far worse things, such as motherless.com, or gurochan?

And if I may be even more blunt, why the fuck are you telling me this? Now if there was something in the story you didn't like but walked into thinking you would like, I am more than open to your thoughts and ideas. But if you read - and the more I think about it the more I've read comments by you on other stories like this - clop just to test yourself and then tell us all how much you hate it, that's kind of the definition of a schmuck. And someone who just needs to perhaps realize smartphones, other pony fiction, life, and other hobbies are more interesting.

This is going to favs! it is so funny!!!

Why is there not moar? I want moar.

3501807 I'm sorry that I can't keep my humor from slipping into even my clop. It's... part of who I am. You may spank me later.

3502024 Chapter two will be up tonight or tomorrow morning.

3502038

3502038 I never say it was a bad thing. I love comedy and well writen fics!

Just... no spaking. Don't need to.

3501655 If the clop made me almost throw up, that means the story was very well-written. Bad clop doesn't do that; it just seems stupid. So in a really wierd, fucked up, roundabout way, I just told you your story was really really good.

3502098 You still need to seriously readjust your torture habits dude. Like, for real.

One of my best friends loves to be degraded to the point she breaks out into tears, but she knows full well that 'torture' is for release. What you are doing...

Man, you might want to see a doctor about that. And that's coming from a guy who sees a shrink.

Don't read 'good' clop for the writing if it makes you want to puke. Read good shippin to make your heart melt.

Another good work here.

I'm not too fond of AppleDash fics but I'm suprised how well this one came out. It was "intriguing" to say the least, you sick, brilliant bastard.

Congrats, you have attracted my attention. Not many clopfics do that, tis funny and rather... I'm kicking myself right now for saying this, but rather arousing.

Rainbow Dash needed Applejack's vagina on her lips.

AGAIN WITH THIS

Didn't really read it. Not right now. I'm in a super weird just like "WHAT IS MY LIFE AUHGHH" mood right now and procrastinating an assignment. Ugh. See you.

Cum sex cloud!

We are looking at 2 inches of cum in today's farecast.

Oh my god! this was probably the best clop I have ever read. I dont even know what to say honestly......

You fucking Rock! I love you guy's for this story! Love you! Love your editors, I love your couch! I love you again!

Thank you!

pegamuffin

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Rainbow Dash needed Applejack's vagina on her lips.

So do I. So does everypony reading this story. We all need Applejack's vagina on our lips. Or Rainbow's, doesn't really matter so long as it's one of them.

4686641 Amen

Best Clop Story Ever!!!!!!!

I was just re-reading this. I have only one thing to say that hasn't been said already.

It was a massive yellow waterfall that put the size of Rainbow's own colored tail to shame.

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