Scootaloo has finally learned how to fly, so of course Rainbow Dash wants to celebrate! However, what Rainbow plans to be the best night ever turns horribly sour, how will she cope with not only being alone but also a murderer?
This is my first try at a fanfiction after reading countless ones If you have any plot/grammatical corrections please tell me
Disclaimer- I do not own My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic, or Hasbro.
I have decided to reveal the plot as I doubt I will write much more of it. Have fun!
Chapters (5)
Pushed the chicken over the edge
Hue hue ima favorite this for updates.
ONLY problem, i didn't really find any horrendous grammar errors worthy of pointing out but you have to... HAVE TO indent every paragraph.
Trust me it will drive everyone nuts if you dont
3755762 That better? I'm not that good with indentations.
3755809 Well first off no but do you edit with Google Docs? i dont even think you have to but it has the perfect paragraph indent feature up top by the tools.
3755816 I do it straight on the sight, it's a bit of a hassle but overall I find is faster
3755828 Ima mess around with it in Google Docs and re-send you link if you want
3755834 thanks, if you want you can be an editor, but only if you want tofarm6.staticflickr.com/5114/5848650233_beb5ef73d5.jpg
3755851 Looks beautiful now
3755975 indeed, I owe you one
Tragedy, Dark, Comedy and slice of life?
Kind of a strange mix there...especially the comedy the tag
RD WHY?!
So
pushed 
into ghastly gorge thinking that 
could fly but it turned out that 
couldn't fly, at least not under pressure. And 
said that it wasn't if she hit the Dangerous rocks, it was when. Oh 
what are you thinking 
3756284 I didn't intend for it to be a comedy but so far the first chapter is hinting that it will be slightly humorous, I will however remove tag if the readers disagree with my choice of tags, also if it looses it's slight comedic heir
3760653 No death aint funny, its just the idea of her pushing her off a cliff results in a few lulz
what a
!
3804375 that's a really punny joke!
I like this story so far. Even though it wasn't as dark as I thought it was going to be.
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!
3823052 I will very soon and believe me, it will get darker
Scootaloo wouldn't call RD 'squirt'
3828898 she'd dying, plus I was stuck for words.
3829200 it just seems like Scoots is mocking Rainbow in a way by saying that.
3829212 maybe she is...
3829214 ......did i just give you an idea?
3829224 Honestly I don't know, i may come up later... Maybe...Possibly...Yeah
3829227 ok.....
3829236 my stories tend to change a lot during its span, so it might not, maybe just a small short part of a chapter.
3829242 thats a bad way of going about writing. You should write down every single idea you can think of, pick out what you think works best then use them to write the story. Never make it up as you go along, its what leads to writers block and poor pacing, as all the idea are truing to jump out of your head at once.
3829562 yes I suppose that is he best way to write
3833465 yes
I feel like
while I read this chapter. Very good story. I want to read more of what happens.
NOOOO! SCOOTALOO!
3833465 I hope this is updated soon I'm going
over this
4131792 Believe me I've been trying, but I've also been planning and right now I have an idea for a new story, but I promise you, the planning is nearly done I'm doing it as fast as possible, every moment i spend on here is me feeling guilty about not writing/ updating. On another note, can you please check and see if you can access any of my recent blog posts? Thank you.
4133770 it's totally fine I just love the story! And I can see the blog posts so you're good
4134336 K 'cuz even when I literally beg for someone to comment anything they refuse, thanks for clearing that up, but if you saw the most recent one, which one do you think would be best?
4134402 I think my top three would be
3 derpy/ditsy (because I see a lot of these)
2 trixie (same as for derpy but I think she could fit better in the fic)
1 luna/ nightmare moon/ both (I see a lot of these too but I just love luna stories of all kinds!)
4134402 on second thought switch trixie and luna around I think that would make for a good fic. The idea sounds perfect!
4135301 so 3 is derpy, 2 is luna etc. and 1 is Trixie? Got it, thanks 4 the info I'm still debating and maybe I could do a collection of chapters for each character. Thnx again
4138151 a collection of chapters sounds great
!
4154926 it shall be done... SPREAD THE NEWS
4157493 I SHALL DO THY BIDDING MY LORD
4158374
4160596 hah! We'll selected video sir!
4163826 R U also a Simpsons fan
4167108 I like the show but I don't usually get the chance to watch a lot of it
4169144 y, is it because you don't have much spare time or you can't find it (just asking to make conversation)
4173089 I don't have a lot of time. Between school and work I don't have a whole lot of free time. Other than fimfiction of course
4174908 we all have to agree that whenever we can fimfiction comes first. And that kids is why I'm almost certain I failed my Physics test.
4178323
same!
4179173 Well at least i didn't fail my chem. write up: I got the best mark I ever got(37/50 or 74%) and I think I got the highest! (the average is about 31-32) I'm so happy!
How do you do in the sciences?
4181926 I'm usually pretty good I'm best in bio but physic is like a slap in the face sometimes