Now normally I'd be crowing at you for this, but the story and the description are telling me that at very least something odd is going on. I'm going with a couple who get their rocks off pulling these scenes, maybe with a hint of giving lazy, pansy-ass ponies a lesson in acting in a crisis.
Well, having to move in December plus frequently going to help take care of my aunt while she undergoes chemo kills the ability to write. But I need to buckle down and write some more.
Interesting.
And now I have the old Dragnet theme in my head. Dammit
away form. away from.
heard by the lights. heard but the lights.
pus off. push off.
Now normally I'd be crowing at you for this, but the story and the description are telling me that at very least something odd is going on. I'm going with a couple who get their rocks off pulling these scenes, maybe with a hint of giving lazy, pansy-ass ponies a lesson in acting in a crisis.
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Dang. Even with a collaborator there are a few errors.
You may be right, and it will be seen in a weeks's time. You won't be disappointed in this story.
3620510
Just wait for the next act.
The story description has me intrigued. I look forward to seeing how this develops.
3621728
I hope the next Act keeps you entertained.
3621657
Eh, two errors in 10k words isn't bad. It's nice to see you writing again.
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Well, having to move in December plus frequently going to help take care of my aunt while she undergoes chemo kills the ability to write. But I need to buckle down and write some more.
3624776
Well it's nice that you've found the time again with all that you are dealing with.
Eagerly awaiting more.
3621657
My editing skills have failed you.
3625144
Feck, I missed them too. I mean, I've found errors in published books. As the old saying goes, "Even Homer nods."
You're a good man, and always up for everything.
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This story remind me of Criminal Minds you should watch it a nice show.
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I know of the show. But like the notes say I was really going for more of a 'Dragnet' feel.