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I'm going on a limb here. Is the story still alive
7702784 yes the story is still alive but with my work I can't get the new chapters uploaded quickly plus I have three other stories on the go to but it's still being made
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the story severely needs to be polished. There's a lot of stuff happening and it is poorly portrayed, not to mention the horrendous grammar mistakes.lb It's grasping at too many ideas and not seeing the ones it already has to their end.
7711204 You do realise this is an ongoing story and Isn't going to end anytime soon? The plot lines I think you are talking about if I stopped them now then the latter half of the story would make no sense. The unfinished plot lines all end near the end of the story when it all comes together. I won't say how as I would give the story away but it all has meaning. Also you keep saying about Grammer but you don't point any out or give actual examples of what's wrong. I know I'm not a professional writer as I do this for fun and to entertain. If I leave out a comma here or there I don't see that as a bad thing.