Diablo crossover.
Act one: After Arcana uses an incomplete portal she gets transported to a world full of potential. But what she brings with her could be too much for this place to handle.
After all, what could one do against such great evils.
I have since abandoned this story, to meet my current criteria this story would need to be re-written from the ground up. I do not recommend reading this. One day I may end of coming back to this, I still see potential in it. But do not trust to hope.
The pacing is really off.
3506260 right ok thanks i'll work on it.
can you give me some examples though so i know where i'm going wrong?
why do some ponies always know what a human is? and something always happened that bad to ponies...
3544624 Well Twilight did ask what Arcana was, as too Fluttershy well...
If some bad didn't happen then there wouldn't be a story would there?
It gets worse