College. It can be tough. It's Octavia's first year in the most prestigious musical college. She plans to become the most famous musician, but as we all know, life can be mysterious. When she finds her roommate Vinyl Scratch, life throws her a curveball, but maybe it's a blessing in disguise. Follow the two in their life changing college experience.
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I'm going to check this out in a few...
~ Michael
The College Life of Octavia and Vinyl Scratch By: Theory404
Score: 5.5 out of 10 - Not bad
- Slightly unoriginal plot (I hope that you will add an original twist in future chapters)
- Decent grammar (Pretty good, but there are still a few mistakes)
- OK dialogue (Seems a little bland, lacks life)
- Paragraph spacing (What you have is technically correct... but is annoying)
- Fast paced chapter (It was both fast and added minimum to the story line)
Comments: I think that this story has potential. As I said the premise isn't original (so far) but I still like it. I know that I'm writing a review a little early, so I'm only doing a review of the chapter. The way that you format thoughts is a little annoying... but I can't complain. Anyway, from what I have seen so far I will definitely check out future chapters.
~ Michael
3479662 :D thanks for your opinion
1. fast paced for a reaon
2. i always love doing twists
3. i have adhd so paragraph stature stays
4.because of 3, my writing lacks grammar and a general fast pacedness
but thanks for your opinion ill get workin :D
3543967 I have ADHD too (along with a few other things) so I can see what you are talking about. It only annoys me because of my OCD... I'm a mess, to be honest.
Anyway, I'm glad that my opinions helped (I think) and I can't wait for future chapters!
~ Michael
I shall follow you, your writing shows potential.
~ Michael
IS THERE GONNA BE MORE?!
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