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TittySparkles
TittySparkles is pretty based, writes great porn that I can rub one off to on a weekly basis, and she has no problem telling societies leftie rejects to fuck off. - Anonymous
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Kinky. Hot. Awesome.
Any fetish you touch is GOLD.
~Skeeter The Lurker
From this picture, the ponified phrase "Bite the pillow, I'm going in dry" would have to be "Bite the hoof, I'm going in dry."
OH COME ON! I DON'T EVEN READ CLOP! WHY DO I THINK THESE THINGS?!
unf
MOAR!
3507431
Don't deny it.
EVERYONE here has read clop at some point.
~Skeeter The Lurker
3507601
Does University Nights count as clop?
3507609
Hmm... Depends on your standards.
~Skeeter The Lurker
based lauren wrote all the futa
You know just because you can't link Clop doesn't mean you can't share the source on cover art... Just say what website it is on and either a couple of the tags or the artist and we can find it ourselves no problem without violating FiMFiction's rules... everypony wins!
FUCKING AMAZING, I swear on my life this was just the start of something good, THERE HAS TO BE MORE... MOOOORRRREEEE!!!!
3507609>>3507623
Depends on what your hands/hooves/noodley appendages are doing while you read.
For those desperately wanting the source pic, the original name is "Commission - lightningdash", and you can find it in this furaffinity gallery (but you'll need to log in to view adult pictures, which is why I can get away with that link).
I found this incredibly easy to masturbate to
Good job
3508104
HAH!
Nice one!
~Skeeter The Lurker
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I've been wondering when this was going to show up. Glad to see it's finally up producing erections and various wetness everywhere.
~SolidFire
aren't all surprises unexpected? isn't that kind of the definition of the word?
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Every Pinkie party ever.
That is all.
The fact I have the link to the story's image means I'm a terrible person. I'm glad.
we needed more of this shippng; thank you.
lesbian horses seem to find me a lot....
strangely i don't mind
You know what's better than seeing a new comment on your story? Seeing a new comment explaining why it received another dislike. So that's exactly what I'm gonna do.
First and foremost, your writing was unbearably passive and boring. Every sentence--every last one--drug on and on. I had to bolt my own feet to the floor to stay grounded, and tried even harder to find the resonation in your paragraphs. I failed. From words that were better left unsaid, to redundant passages and dialogue, I just read 10,000+ words of rhetoric that conveyed little to NO storytelling whatsoever. The entire first half of this fic was WAY too 'show-y'. Though I applaud you for the opening paragraph--giving us a light inner-conflict via Lightning Dust--the rest of it was boring and had almost no bite to it. Perhaps it'd be the opposite if it was told in 'story form' instead of a clumpy mass of sensory details. The later parts of this review will emphasize that.
Next time, for those who like reading for MORE than just good sensory details (which you're rather skilled at), try to begin your fic with your narrative voice, instead of 'tit-for-tot' descriptions.
Second, and perhaps my most prominent issue: the plot-holes. What. The actual. Fuck. The first thing that slapped me was Dash's acceptance into the Wonderbolts. Unless MLP: FiM canonically screwed itself, the Wonderbolt academy is CLOSELY reminiscent to the United States Air Force. And unless I'm sadly mistaken, Dash would've likely gone through a Physical Exam. So how the Hell do her superiors not know about her confused gender? And if they do, WHY are we not told about it??? Seriously, the only thing that convinced me Spitfire had even half a brain, was her awareness of Dash's mal-hygiene. The passive narration was acceptable enough for me to read on, but when I gathered that info (or lack thereof) reading the rest of this killed me inside. Slowly.
Another detail that drove my fingers into my skull: just how--HOW--can Dash not reach every part of her wings? For starters, pegasi wings are absurdly small. I mean, they barely peak over one's head. And even if they did, pegasi wings have been proven very dexterous (i.e; literally 'wrapping' a wings around another pony). Plus, even if their hooves couldn't reach for preening, they're freakin' horses; they have long necks and can use their mouths. The more I think of it, more it seems like a lousy plot-device or a lame excuse to excite your readers. Just... no.
Last thing with the plot-holes, but not really a big deal: why was Dash the only one out of Uniform? Just a nitpick, but... It just come across as writers' convenience. I HATE writers' convenience.
Last but CERTAINLY not least: the lack of storytelling. Not gonna lie. The main reason I read onward was to find an actual story behind all this. Maybe there was a detail that slapped the reader silly. Maybe there was a piece of info that would make the first 3000 words resonate. There wasn't. At all. It was filled with clumps of excessive 'showing' and useless 'telling'. Thousands, and I do mean THOUSANDS of words, could've been chopped, seasoned, and sautéed into a 1000 word composition that gave us all the info we'd need to CARE about Dash's extra appendage, and her struggles with it. Instead, we were dragged by our heels through UNACCEPTABLE narrative intermissions before we got to the point.
*Sighs*
I know this is harsh, but I can't stand idly by and ignore these shortcomings. With what you put into word-count and story resolution, I can tell this wasn't just for fun. Otherwise, I wouldn't have bothered; I would have hit 'dislike' and ran for the hills. If it turns out I'm wrong, and you indeed did this for shits and giggles, than I must look at some of your other pieces. I must know if these flaws in your writing was just a fluke.
Forgive my harshness, fellow author, but it's what I would want in any review. Without a doubt.
With sincerest apologies--Favor
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apparently 96 others don't really care about the way the story is written. haven't read the story yet so i can't really judge.
3508956 Aaaaand there's the downside...
3508976
that's life my friend. i'll just move on to the next story. might read this or maybe not.
Well tittysparklez you did it again.
wtf is futa
isn't that like a couch
Futa is where its a girl but she has a cock or both, not sure, think just a dick
You have no idea how many times I actually d'awwed during this reading. Normally don't read clop, but you had me at Rainbow Dash sticking up for LD and owning up to her own mistakes. RD's innocence and insecurities were so well played. This story was so damn cute. Even the make out was really involving and expressive. While a couple tiny foreplay scenes dragged on a smidge too long, the way Lightning Dust treated Dash and really worked to make her first real experience special was so hot.
Rainbow Dust is an OTP I rarely get to enjoy. This was just the icing on the cake. All I need now is wake up the next day to a new chapter of Better Than Best and I'll just melt. You two have the best Lightning Dust.
I'm not sure how I feel about this...
Absolutely amazing story people with talent like you are the reason I got an account here. Good work and I hope to see more soon.
That cover pic tho...
Cover image source?
3509470
Futa is short for Futanari,
Me to
3509470 i still can't stop laughing!!!
3509470 I laughed so hard at this, I nearly choked on air.
Well it was alright. Kinda generic, tbh.
3509470
tinyhomeblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/02/futon-couch.jpg
Futon, not futa.
3509800 suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/24347873/images/1366437380075.jpg
3510397 Heretic
How many people are posting from this account? One does not simply change from disgusting to sweet so fast.
more?
3509470
The full term is futanari. Do with that what you will...
Oh, naive internet user!
3508892 ... holy shit I wish more people reviewed like you.
3509800 C'mon, you know you liked it.