Pinkie visits Rainbow Dash, and finds her engrossed in a certain VR video game. So she decides to join in, and enters the world of... Corruption of Champions.
Wow, Pinkamena shows her part I see. Oh and look at that, I got some promoting here too! Yaaay!
Well anyway, murderizing the enemies is not a common thing to do in CoC, but guess what, this is a fanfiction! Hah, I already know how to work on my story and make it better! I just hope my style of writing won't screw up the fighting scenes too bad...
-Zeph
EDIT: Once I'm done with about 3 chapters, I will rewrite the first chapter to feel less rushed.
...Ouch. Let it be known around the world: Never ask Pinkie for her his "hard rod". Unless you're a certain cute mouse girl named Amily I guess this means there won't be any Urta or Loppe for Pinkie. Thank Luna!
Ouch. Usually, you don't kill anything in this game; guess Pinkie didn't know that... She's gotta be super horny now, though. Some relief in the next chapter, then? Let's see that brand-new doggy tool put to good use
4358032 yeah but i kind of see it as (ok wow ive been sitting here for a few thinking of how to say this) meh i dont care how stupid i sound ill just type it the sperm in a persons dick is like the main genes the womans womb uses while using her own genes to fill in the holes so to me the children would still need incest for the race to survive but to me its just a little less like incest
Now this is very unexpected. It seems you have a very rare talent for actually being able to write Pinkie Pie (which very few people can do) conveying her thoughts and dialogue thats very true to her character, yet keep her in check so she isn't overbearing. The result is a much better story than the Rainbow Dash version. The fact is Pinkie's energy transfers over to all aspects of the story making everything just feel fun and fresh. I mean when you have lines like "I recognise the symptoms almost immediately. She has Fluttershy syndrome, or shyness for short." you just get a more emotional and real story. The world is just more vivid such as when Pinkie never once checks her stats and simply feels the effects of the world, or when a character or something of plot significance interacts with her she actually immerses herself which is what coc is all about. When the goblin asks if she wants to fuck she doesn't go, well it's a video game so sure, she genuinely approaches the issue as if it was a real one. Debating the ramifications of cheating, creating this realistic version of coc through Pinkie's childlike eyes in an almost wonderland like way.
4381948 Thanks Pinkie's style was a hard one to nail down, so I'm glad you think I've managed to pull it off.
Yeah, I was trying to give each character their own uniqueness, both in terms narration and how they play the game. Rainbow kinda represents the common adult gamer, easily bored, and having so many games available that if she does get bored of one she'll just move onto another, so never really giving herself time to get immersed in a single one unless it really catches her interest. Pinkie meanwhile is the child gamer we all remember being. Every new game is a treat, and it would likely be the only one she'd play for ages, so she's able to dive into the full experience right from the get-go.
"You want my hard rod inside you? Then take it, whore!" I thrust my sword into the goblin's cunt, and slit her open from crotch to throat faster than her scream can leave her lungs. She slumps to the ground, dead.
Okay, I've run through my backlog of finished chapters, so this is probably where the daily updates are gonna have to stop.
Also, this is a story.
Wow, Pinkamena shows her part I see.
Oh and look at that, I got some promoting here too!
Yaaay!
Well anyway, murderizing the enemies is not a common thing to do in CoC, but guess what, this is a fanfiction!
Hah, I already know how to work on my story and make it better!
I just hope my style of writing won't screw up the fighting scenes too bad...
-Zeph
EDIT: Once I'm done with about 3 chapters, I will rewrite the first chapter to feel less rushed.
Goddamn.
Just...goddamn.
And now we see why the rest of the Mane 6 should consider themselves very, very lucky.
...Ouch. Let it be known around the world: Never ask Pinkie for
herhis "hard rod". Unless you're a certain cute mouse girl named AmilyI guess this means there won't be any Urta or Loppe for Pinkie. Thank Luna!
Ouch. Usually, you don't kill anything in this game; guess Pinkie didn't know that...
She's gotta be super horny now, though. Some relief in the next chapter, then? Let's see that brand-new doggy tool put to good use
Suck for Urta, she has a tragic back-story regarding her sterility. Though as someone trying to be a good person I can see Pinkie trying to help out.
Pinkie's hard shaft is wet now. Should probably clean up at the lake.
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Yup
Check CoC Wiki, If I remember this right you need centaur body and no coruption to meet main six near the Lake
4358032 yeah but i kind of see it as (ok wow ive been sitting here for a few thinking of how to say this) meh i dont care how stupid i sound ill just type it the sperm in a persons dick is like the main genes the womans womb uses while using her own genes to fill in the holes so to me the children would still need incest for the race to survive but to me its just a little less like incest
Note to self...100% lust on pinkie means Piniemena comes out and and shows you her favorite sharp rod...
Now this is very unexpected. It seems you have a very rare talent for actually being able to write Pinkie Pie (which very few people can do) conveying her thoughts and dialogue thats very true to her character, yet keep her in check so she isn't overbearing. The result is a much better story than the Rainbow Dash version. The fact is Pinkie's energy transfers over to all aspects of the story making everything just feel fun and fresh. I mean when you have lines like "I recognise the symptoms almost immediately. She has Fluttershy syndrome, or shyness for short." you just get a more emotional and real story. The world is just more vivid such as when Pinkie never once checks her stats and simply feels the effects of the world, or when a character or something of plot significance interacts with her she actually immerses herself which is what coc is all about. When the goblin asks if she wants to fuck she doesn't go, well it's a video game so sure, she genuinely approaches the issue as if it was a real one. Debating the ramifications of cheating, creating this realistic version of coc through Pinkie's childlike eyes in an almost wonderland like way.
Contrasting with Rainbow it's a very blasé and grey story. With RD she really just doesn't seem to give a fuck, she just goes along with it, not really interested with whats happening. And ironically RD breaks the fourth wall more than Pinkie Pie breaking the illusion of the world by constantly mentioning the devs, stats, and other things. Seems like you're going to continue both series side by side, but if you ever decide to just focus on one you should definitely make it this one or at least focus on it the most, just my opinion though
4381948
Thanks
Pinkie's style was a hard one to nail down, so I'm glad you think I've managed to pull it off.
Yeah, I was trying to give each character their own uniqueness, both in terms narration and how they play the game.
Rainbow kinda represents the common adult gamer, easily bored, and having so many games available that if she does get bored of one she'll just move onto another, so never really giving herself time to get immersed in a single one unless it really catches her interest.
Pinkie meanwhile is the child gamer we all remember being. Every new game is a treat, and it would likely be the only one she'd play for ages, so she's able to dive into the full experience right from the get-go.
Damn Pinkie, that was hardcore.