------ Camera moving across the open sea towards a small boat in the distance
Oh don't you dare look back A shadow appearing in the water
Just keep your eyes on me …getting larger as it gets closer to the boat
I said your holding back …turning into a growing mound of water
She said shut up and sail with me The “King of the Near Sea” bursting out from the water
This woman is my destiny Pinkie Pie on the boat holding her hat with one hoof
She said …throwing a punch forward
Ooh ooh ooh …close-up of her foreleg extending
Shut up and sail with me Still shot of Pinkie hitting the fish square in the jaw
------ Shot of the story’s logo[1] over a black background
------ …fading away to a disco floor Pinkie is dancing on
We were ready for a fight Fluttershy fading into view, shuffling her hooves next to Pinkie
Ready to stand up for what is right Rainbow Dash flying into the picture to join
Stand our ground in the fading light Rarity moonwalking in from the other side in an appropriate outfit
Oh we were bound to get together Spike dropping in from above to join
Bound to get together Applejack jumping in from the side, whipping her lasso with her tail at the side of the screen . and rolling the disco background up, causing them all to fall off
She took my arm Pinkie grabbing her crew with one extending arm
I don't know how it happened …grabbing the side of a cliff with the other
We took the floor and she said …and swinging them all onto the Going Merry
Oh don't you dare look back Camera zooming in to move over the ship, going past Rarity sewing fabric
Just keep your eyes on me …Applejack bucking a tree with one hoof
I said your holding back …Fluttershy sorting her medical supplies
She said shut up and sail with me …Rainbow Dash exercising before striking a pose
This woman is my destiny …Spike making new bullets with his alchemy kit, looking up and towards Pinkie
She said ...finally moving to Pinkie sitting on the figurehead
Ooh ooh ooh …throwing up her arms…
Shut up and sail with me …and jumping off the boat
------ Picture changing to a sea map, with a chibi Pinkie
An old straw hat and unruly mane running in front of the Going Merry and
Making sure my life'd never be the same the ponies they met on their travels in the background
I felt it in my soul as she yelled my name
I knew we were bound to be together View moving behind Pinkie as she charges up to Arlong Park
Bound to be together Jumping and raising a hoof in attack at the shadowy figure of Arlong
She took my arm Jump to Iron Will and Trixie in Loguetown
I don't know how it happened …Vinyl and Marines in Loguetown
We took the floor …Pinkie standing between both groups, turning her head to look up at the dark clouds where . lightning is building
And she said Lightning shooting down and filling the screen
Oh don't you dare look back Pinkie and crew running through Loguetown
Just keep your eyes on me Neon with a squad of Marines
I said your holding back …pointing a hoof and giving the signal to fire
She said shut up and sail with me Pinkie pulling her crew into a side street, just in time to avoid the explosion
This woman is my destiny Vinyl standing at the end of the street, hooves charging with blue electricity
She said ooh ooh ooh …tensing and charging forward, then jumping
Shut up and sail with me Still shot of Vinyl hanging in the air, about to clash with Pipsqueak and his crew
Oh come on girl! Jump to the main sail of Going Merry unfolding
--- The ship sailing through a storm
---- --- towards the entrance of Reverse Mountain
--- ---- …the Straw Hats standing on the deck around a barrel
-- -- -- -- -- -- ---- …placing their hoof/claw on the barrel one by one
-- Water spraying to the right
-- Water spraying to the left
---___ The Going Merry jumping the top of Reverse Mountain and down the slope
Deep in her eyes Split screen between Pinkie getting her hat from Shanks
I think I see the future …and Pinkie looking out at sea
I realize Split screen between Rainbow getting slashed by Spitfire
This is my last chance …and raising her sword for her oath
She took my arm Split screen between Spike staring up into a rain of falling purple feathers
I don't know how it happened …and Fluttershy running through a burning field
We took the floor and she said The straw hat flying up into the sky
------ Sepia picture of past Loguetown
------ Ponies stomping their hooves as lines of marines trudge by in tact
Oh don't you dare look back Clover being led to the scaffold
Just keep your eyes on me Close-up of her grinning
I said your holding back The executioners taking position at her sides
She said shut up and sail with me Camera moving in as Clover raises her head
This woman is my destiny …saying her final words
She said …face turning to shadows again
Ooh ooh ooh Camera suddenly moving out to show the executioners having impaled her
Shut up and sail And moving out again to show the crowd bursting into cheers and throwing up their hats
Oh don't you dare look back Rainbow looking around at the Marines surrounding her
Just keep your eyes on me …knocking them all back with one strike of her wings
I said your holding back Applejack bucking another Marine into a group of them
She said shut up and sail with me One of the leftover Marines getting hit by an explosive bullet
This woman is my destiny Camera turns to Spike holding his sling, backing away from the Marines with Rarity . (levitating her staff) and Fluttershy behind him
She said ooh ooh ooh Pinkie jumping in front of them
Shut up and sail with me …and whipping the Marines away with one leg
------ Random shots of Pinkie and her crew
Ooh ooh ooh shut up sail with me running across different islands
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Ooh ooh ooh shut up sail with me
-- Shot of Pipsqueak and his crew
-- Shot of Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon
-- Shot of Shanks and Spitfire
------ Final shot of the Straw Hats in front of their ship
[1] Logo not yet existing
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Good Conecept ;)
i like.
That is a good spoiler, doesn't give away who they are coming from but lets you think who they belong to.
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Alright Spitfire and the other Strawhats were predictable, but Vinyl as Smoker caught me off-guard
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I'm the best at cones.
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Thanks. Those will play a role in season two. And Fluttershy's scene in season four.
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Eheheheh... Muhahahah!
I'm gonna have fun with that one.
Oh yeah, there was that other guy, Usopp. Completely forgot about him. So Spike is Usopp, but with the falling purple feathers I can't help but think there's still the connection between him and Twilight. Maybe she had to leave him behind because of the bounty on her head and all the people trying to kill her if she's Robin's counterpart. And he has been lying and making up stories ever since because her last words to him were to deceive anyone trying to follow and never let anyone know who he really was. He's been telling tall unbelievable tales for so long that they're just part of him now.
Wait, if Pinkie is Luffy, Maude is Ace isn't she? She's going to die! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! And Limestone and Marble are both Sabo.
And Octavia as Brooke, weird to see her as a skeleton but OK.
Will AppleJack be a bit Stallion crazy the way Sanji is crazy for pretty girls or will she be crazier for apples?
Going to vote for Princess Cadance for Vivi.
Finally, Vinyl for Smoker? Did I read that right? And Trixie for Buggy, correct?
Great story and hope to see more.
I fully expect this story to be the longest one on the site when you are done.
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That's not going to happen for two reasons (aside from me being a lazy bum): First because I'm gonna make a new story for every season; and second because even if you count them as one, I neither can nor want to beat some other stories and story series on this site. I'm talking about a certain series of stories with nordic names, whose lengths seem to be inverse to the length and use of their story descriptions.
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*Gaaaaasp* How could you forget about the great Captain Usopp!?
All jokes aside, I'm happy to see people speculating on that. And I can tell you that while you have some things right in a broad sense, you got the details amusingly wrong.
And really, there is only one character that I can cast the Princess Of Mero-Mero as, isn't there?
7141283 Well, that's a rather uh..... pink pairing right there. But you're right. There really is only one pony for the job.
okay, that gets you an extra on your final score, just for that!
that was cool
So there's (more than likely) a connection between Spike and Twilight is there? Interesting. I thought you were gonna make Twilight a different version of Robin and leave it at that, but it seems that there's gonna be something even more interesting about Twilight.
One thing I want to ask though, are you gonna be inventing devil fruit powers? Because if so, I think Twilight with a logia devil fruit of paper would be perfect.
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Glad it's getting such a good reception.
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Yes, I will be inventing Devil Fruits. Right in the next chapter, acually. Yes, I know what Devil Fruit Twilight will have. No, not that one.
And yes, it will be painfully obvious in hindsight.
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I've told you, (I think, maybe not and sorry if so) reading is my life and what I plan to do with my life, when I'm not distracted by other things. I notice these things and have learned to predict what's going to happen. Totally saw the 'duck, duck, goose' bit coming.
7142629 Something obvious that isn't paper...Well, it's either a flat out Book-Book Fruit or the Message-Message Fruit. Or judging by the intro, maybe something like a Feather-Feather Fruit.
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Oh great, now I'm curious. Thanks a lot.
7142629 I'm guessing that Twilight will get Robin's devil fruit for no other reason than to make the 'wings' that Robin made with her devil fruit powers. Either that or some sort of alicorn wing power fruit.
Either way, Twilights power will be to sprout wings.
I can imagine that Maud is a high ranking Marine. VERY high ranking.
Maud: "so, how has my sister been? I know she can be a hoof full."
Crew: "no. Not at all."
Maud: "...you're good people."
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Maud is deeeeaaaaad!
Or is she?
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Trixie would take the place of the iron masked douche bag from the CP9 arc. =)
BREAK HER JAW!! I'm tired of hearing that self loving douche. =P
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Not Trixie. Someone far worse and hated than that.
"Ehhhh? Did someone say waifu?"
Am I the only one who can't get used to actually "reading" an opening?
Wait, so who is chopper?
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I wish I could animate the whole thing for you, but honestly, I can't. And even if I could it would probably take about as long as writing half of this story.
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Well, Fluttershy is the crew's doctor. I'm going to skip the whole Drum Island arc, which has the nice effect of saving me a couple weeks of writing at least. Maybe someday I'll make a bonus story of it, but I wouldn't count on it.
7165720 Haha Buggie and Trixy, this couldn't get any better!
7165720 And a peppermint pony?!
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In other words, a
7165985 Ohh haha! School foals! I see now!
Is Twilight gonna be Robin?
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Eventually, yes. It's gonna go differently than in the manga, though.
Gol D Clover: The D is very important although they don't really explain why. Apparently the "Will of D" is a kind of destiny that makes you anti-establishmentarian.
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Ironically, his identity as a descendant of "D" was apparently kept so secret that even Whitebeard didn't know until Gol told him himself. It's strange sometimes how some things manage to stay secret even to the people directly involved in this world (though I'm probably going to do that to a lesser degree than in the manga).
I haven't watched One Piece before, but apart from the fact that I only saw a few glimpses of an Arabic dubbed version on mbc 3, I might really like to. It IS an anime, right?
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It's an anime and a manga. Quite a bit to watch, too, although I can only recommend it.