Sweet Apple Saviour

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(Written under username DashingMane)
As Big Mac prepares to do unspeakable things to the CMC they are rescued by an angel.

So, this is what should have happened in THAT fic, which I won't name.

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DragonOverlord2012

DragonOverlord2012 #1 · Dec 22nd, 2013 · 2 · ·

Okay, now I have to say just copy pasting the beginning of SAM was just lazy. Even more lazy is you didn't even attempt to make the rest of the fic in the same formatting (as terrible as the original formatting was, but the point stands). To make this better, I'd suggest running this by an editor to have the whole thing re-formatted to the point it's more, for lack of better word, readable.

Now that that's out of the way, I'll admit I've never really watched Doctor Who except for two episodes from one of the newer seasons, but I really liked those two episodes and I'm thinking of marathoning the series at some point. A lot of people have recomended it, but I'm lazy.

That being said...thank you. Just...thank you for this. SAM was terrible in every way imaginable. The formatting was all over the place to the point that paragraghs were seperated mid-sentance. The grammar and spelling was simply atrocious as well.

Now, I'm a morally ambiguous sociopath with socially unacceptable kinks, but that thing makes me sick to my stomach. So out of character, so disgusting, and completely out of fucking nowhere! Thank you for writing this. It makes me feel better.

BrunnenG

BrunnenG #2 · Dec 22nd, 2013 · · ·

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Okay, now I have to say just copy pasting the beginning of SAM was just lazy.

Not lazy - quite deliberate I assure you, I had my reasons.

Just...thank you for this. SAM was terrible in every way imaginable. The formatting was all over the place to the point that paragraghs were seperated mid-sentance. The grammar and spelling was simply atrocious as well.

paragraphs and mid-sentence even. Yes I'm probably one of the most fastidious grammar fascists on the site, badly written fics bring me out in hives.

but that thing makes me sick to my stomach.......Thank you for writing this. It makes me feel better.

Awww sweetie, I wrote this to help people who've been traumatised by SAM and help them 'unsee' it as much as possible.
So if you feel better thats a job well done