This story is a sequel to Overpinking It
Ponky Piano returns home to Ponyville from Bitaly for a single day, to visit with his very special somepony, Pinkie Pie. Little does he know that his plans for the day are not going to go quite as he had hoped!
Damn. You can FEEL the effort put into this.
You must truly miss him. Anyway, well done.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Ah, this was good. Good to know that Ponky is doing well in Italy.
I knew how this story was going to end the second Pinkie Pie made an excuse, but that didn't mean I felt pangs of sadness every time an excuse was made, and it certainly didn't effect how I felt during the reveal. Nicely done.
omg props another story well told. i loved it, i had a little trouble reading Veneighce i was all confused and then i rememberd that venice is in italy. haha, love the story and cant wait until you write another fantastic story
Wonderful story. I love when a sequel captures the same spark as the original. This was well written, sweet, and charming. You certainly have a touch. I can't wait to see what you do next.
A very nice continuation.
Ponky, props and purple prose... UGH A TONGUE TWISTER, IM SCREWED