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Jade Ring


The purpose of a story is that it's a story. It can be more, but it can never be less.

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Last night, I downed a Red Bull and sat down to edit another story. Instead I wrote this in three hours.

Red Bull: It's better than alcohol. :trollestia:

I swear, that ending was hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:

BEST. ENDING. EVER. :rainbowlaugh:

Dude, you did not disappoint, as expected, but this was frikkin' brilliant. It's so hard to find a good humanized clopfic that isn't just bland and overused, and even if you were hyped up on caffeine when you wrote this, it was amazing. Take all of my mustaches.

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

p.s. - if this don't get featured, then this site is seriously stupid.

Well, pretty darn good for a first clopfic. I hadn't actually planned on reading this, but I'm glad I did. Well done!

~SolidFire

:pinkiehappy: This was a lot of fun! Such a fun treat to see FlutterDash like this, you know? Well done! :twilightsmile:

This. Is. Amazing!!! :pinkiesad2:

jz1

Good story, Great ending. Is there a chance that we can see that camshow as well?

3456331 Who knows what the future may hold?

The two new bodies climbed onto the bed and basically attacked the riding woman's breasts. Pleasured moans soon filled the air.

Twilight thought about it, shrugged, and made to unbutton her jeans. “Never mind. The pros outweigh the cons.”

OH MY GOD! MY SIDES ARE KILLING ME! :rainbowlaugh:

best story I've read all day:moustache:

normally i dont like clop, and there wasnt much going for this one; but DAT ENDING. totally worth a like

3456510 I'll give you TWO redbulls!

holly clop man that was hot , and that last line , OH MY GODDESS'S i bout woke the dead laughing , the pros outweigh the cons , wow thats twilight for you , you write the charictors very well , and as to the energy drink , just go to the store and buy caffeene pills there cheeper and they last longer , ive been up for like 37 houres , and have only slept about 5hr's of that , half an hour here half an hour there , and before you know it you're right as rain.

Now onto my assessment of youre Plot Line , well done give us intro add a reason for us to stay and pay attention , then CLOPCLOPCLOP, then LOLZ .

in terms of mustash awards this gets :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:/:moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

Tis in my read later list. Clopfics aint quiet my thing but comments suggest it might be a good read. :twilightblush:

That was excellent.

Well, that was something. :twilightblush: Like everyone said the ending was great to.

“Relax, babe. It's not like anybody we know's gonna be watching. Right?”

Bwahaha, if only you knew :rainbowkiss:

i was reading this in class and the ending caught me off guard. i laughed so hard that everyone was staring at me! :twilightoops::twilightblush::fluttercry::facehoof:

I'm not usually a fan of humanized ponies. At the same time, I normally don't read clop very often.

I found this idea really entertaining for some reason though, so I read it. The ending didn't surprise me too much, but was funny nevertheless.

Who would expect Fluttershy to be the one who enjoys people watching her? :rainbowwild:

DJRD

Me at the end of reading this: Goodbye, childhood... :fluttercry:
Me two seconds later: This story was so weird! But okay. So... :moustache:

Soooooooooooooooo.......... are we gonna get a sequel involving what was going on with the other channel?

Great ending! It was AWSOME for only "editing a couple stories."
Is there going to be a sequal.
Please :fluttercry:

I have never EVER liked humanized ponies, it ruins the purpose of them being ponies...BUT this was awesome.

LIKED AND FAVED.:pinkiesmile:

This was my first clopfic. On one hoof, I hate you for it. On the other, I love you.

I've been reading clop for a long time now, this is the best one.

I never fave clop, but I'm doing it now. Up vote, favourite, and comment.
:rainbowwild::pinkiehappy::yay:

I wonder what you'd write if I gave you TWO Redbulls, or even THREE! You could write the most glorious, insane, shameless clop imaginable!

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