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Suicide is not fun when you don't take millions with you. I want to see everyone die!!!
Well something amazing is about to happen and end in very interesting way it seems.
4350379 'Allah Akbar' I think is what you meant to say
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I think most of his traps were non-lethal, most of them being illusions or trickery with the rest being just random or power draining/form changing.
I want to see a guard lose his marbles... literally, I want to see marbles fall out of a guards ear and lose them.
Why is Miracle of Sound's Joker's Song going through my head?
Two things.
ONE: I'm pretty sure it's private not privet.
TWO: Ponies don't have hands...that would be creepy.
You tease, you! Make these chapters longer. Do it for the sun!
4351099 Thanks, Word is giving me the blues and google doc only catches spelling errors.
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I still want to see all of them die...
If you know a story that the human vilian wins exept malidus, or whatever, let me know.
Interesting!
I like your work so far. I'm especially looking forward to the point where they find out how well he played them. Other than that, I have just one suggestion: Don't let the unicorn's keep their horns when turned human. With the Pegasus and their wings, It looks nice, but humans with horns growing out of their head would just look awkward. I would suggest having the horn become either a marking on the forhead (like juraians(?) from Tenchi Muyo), or having them become a small, embedded gem stone (like Raven from Teen Titans). Either way would look better than a horn in my opinion.
Sergeant and Ma'am, not Sargent and Mam.