Celestia and Luna had been fighting the war against Discord and his disharmony for a long time, and they finally have their chance to take him down for good. Or at least to the best of their abilities. But as Discord is, he isn't ready to give up yet and he has one last plan in his hands.
A meeting between the current leader and the future ruler ensues and Discord reveals his plans, as well as his newest spell. A spell so powerful, that it has a chance of changing the events of thousands of years to come... and to even keep him from being locked away as the sisters intend.
And all he needs to do is get Celestia alone.
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Nice. A few grammatical errors here and there, but overall, a good story.
3488184 Thank you ever so kindly, my fellow.
3488198 Love the idea, love the writing... I love everything
This is one of the best stories I have read in a while, thank you for writing it
3488408 Thanks, my dear fellow. It means a lot!
MIND = BLOWN
3488501 Actually, MIND + BLOWN = CARROT!
Well, I think she goes crazy a bit too fast, but I liked it all in all. Take a like.
Hmm, an interesting idea.
Silver Moon has the gist of what stuck out of an otherwise well written piece; the shift from Celestia to talking as if she was Discord happened FAST. Like, New Academy Record fast
Good show, sir! Very nice indeed... It's quite short so I'm afraid I don't have much here in terms of constructive criticism. The pacing I think felt a bit fast and somewhat jarring, but apparently my sense of pacing is atrocious, so I'm not sure how you ought to take that...
Overall I think it was just too short. A little more descriptive detail and prose could have gone a long way for your story. also, the dialogue was at times a bt off... mostly Celestia's dialogue. try to be a little less cliche with... well, try to be less cliche.
overall rating:
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Omg.... that was like, the BEST TWIST EVER!!! I sure was not expecting discord going Into Celestias body.. Weird!
But how could Discord use the Elements?
This...is...Awesome!!!!!!!!!!! so much
SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!
3493889 So what are the mortal 7 things you must not do in a mlp fanfic? xD
Curious since i want to try in this writing expertise xD
YEESSSSSS! I finally found this fic again! I read this back before I had an account here and desperately wanted to find it again ever since! I absolutely love this fic and THAT TWIST!
I WANT IT!
No, but, seriously, I honestly would love to make a fic exploring this concept- that the Celestia in canon is in fact the real Discord! This is soooo much I can do with that concept. I even wrote unpublished rough draft of Twilight reacting to being informed of that, with rather amusing results.
May I please make a continuation of this? Or at least use that bit in a fic?