At that moment I bolted awake in my bed. I was breathing heavy and was dripping with sweat. I guess I had that dream again. That dream that never leaves me alone. That dream that drives me to the brink of madness. That dream where Vinyl is still alive. I hate that dream. It keeps me wanting her back, and stops me from progressing. Ever since she died, I have not been the same pony. I used to be cheery and happy. Now, I have become very one-dimensional. A walking puppet, it seems. Even though Vinyl died a year ago, I find it hard to let go. I loved her, and then she was suddenly taken away. Ah well. I try not to think about these things. Dreaming and wishing won't make the situation any better for me.
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Good story nice work
the seconed to last piece she produced, the final being one she said to be played at her funeral, entitled, "don't let the music die"
so short, yet so long... i cry
3438652 Don't worry, It's FAR from over!
Good things about this chapter: Punctuation.
Things this chapter lacked: Paragraphing, and it was awful short, too.
3438944 I completely understand. All these chapters were pre-written, and were initially supposed to be just one long story, but after months of writing and no end in near sight, I decided to publish them as chapters. The only problem is that these wern't really supposed to be chapters, per say.
Now that I've decided to publish them as chapters, they should be more chapter-like. Thanks for the criticism! 
interesting, I find myself in that situation sometimes but as a daydream that pulls me off into a distant land, rather than jolting from a nightmare at night.
*Sees title* Here we go... *Reads* Not bad. My only real gripe here are a few minor editing things. As mentioned in a previous comment, you may want to put spaces between each paragraph to tidy it up a little. Also, there are a few sentences that I feel can be tied together (personal opinion) and the first five chapters can be tied together into one. You've really got something here, all you need is a bit of editing done. Keep up the good work!
That title makes me think of Harry Potter for some reason. Can't imagine why...
This wasn't actually too bad. Some bad writing here and there, but not too bad. I kind of liked it.
Looking forward to reading more of this story as it's posted.
Really nice story and everything is going well but i spotted one mistake when they said goodbye to each other she called him doctor whooves but he did not say anything about whooves as the seccond part of his name but he said just doctor
Wait a sec....No one is acknowledging the fact that the title image’s quote is referencing RWBY?