Ponies have long been at the top of the food chain, but recently it has all changed. The gates of Tartarus are open; normally docile creatures are growing and feeding, and all of Equestria is in turmoil.
3433268 I could fit that in... though they may limp to town only to get eaten by a giant frog.
I'm trying to mix soft/hard and other varieties (including hybrid ponies). It may take a while to "pay off" but there should eventually be every instance of vore imaginable from anal to zoology.
Soarin frowned and looked down, sighing. “Cloudsdale is gone. What is left in the air has been abandoned, and the other cloud cities have all been evacuated or hit.”
“This is horrible.”
So deadpan.
I will masturbate furiously to Blue Blood's violent death, I promise you this. So pick something as horrible as imaginatively possible, 'cause I'm not becoming irrdeemable fast enough here!
Can't have a horror story without Blueblood, or someone like him. You know, the kind of character who seems to have no purpose other than to do as much as possible to deserve his inevitable death before it happens.
Great so far, I hope to see at least some mane6 death before the end too. Actually I'd be great with a complete downer ending as long as there was plenty of brutal vore between now and then.
And now, because no one asked for it, TERRIBLE OUT OF CONTEXT JOKES!
Her throat was still hoarse
Is there a time her throat isn't Horse?
One last spasm racked her body as she passed out. Her muscles liquefied and her brain shut down.
In other words, an average night in the world of Kaidan, just missing the words "in ecstasy".
Spitfire missing, Derpy didn’t show up to work, and Scootaloo missing class
Problem thinks has grammar Twilight does. Missing words is yes.
Oh, and you have to rub me lots, it feels awesome!
Stallions and gentlemares, I present the mind of every male's hormones ever.
The spider’s dying act had been to reproduce. Scootaloo felt her back itching so she spread her wings, and felt four appendages spill out from under them. Looking behind her revealed four spider legs, two under each wing, that joined her pony legs to give her eight total.
Last chapter:No! I MUST FIGHT THE SPIDERS! This chapter:No Scootaloo. You ARE the spiders. And then Scootaloo was a brood mother.
3429432 So Twilight and Fluttershy get digested by Discord, Rarity by Spike, Appplejack and Rainbow Dash still have their fates uncertain, Pinkie Pie will live... good Lord, ponykind is so screwed. P.S:Please let Twilights last thought be something like "Well, at least i will not be married to Blueblood anymore"
3488077 Stress relief...Pinkie Pie trying to eat all of her friends so that they will be together forever, or Princess Celestia returning as an predator and eating her student because Twilight will accept even death if it means escaping from Blueblood.
I was made to read this as a dare (I'm not much into clop) But I must say, while I didn't come for the erotic value, I stayed for the horror value. I mean.. holy crap... the spiders... ugh reminds me of The Mist Some parts sent goosebumps up my neck, and that's a sign of a good story in my book :3
But back to topic, I wish to ask for your permission to write a spin off of this story. You would be given credit for the original work and all, I just need your ok to write it. Thanks for reading!
3599198 Yeah, feel free to write a spin-off. If not for real-life and snow, I'd have updated by now... I have big plans for Blue Blood next chapter.
And yeah, this one is meant to be more of a horror story. Sex will either be like, a succubi wanting to eat a stallion's soul, or a by-product of powerful neurotoxins causing a mare to orgasm as they asphyxiate.
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There's a special level of hell for Blue Blood.
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I could fit that in... though they may limp to town only to get eaten by a giant frog.
I'm trying to mix soft/hard and other varieties (including hybrid ponies). It may take a while to "pay off" but there should eventually be every instance of vore imaginable from anal to zoology.
This was good...
So deadpan.
I will masturbate furiously to Blue Blood's violent death, I promise you this. So pick something as horrible as imaginatively possible, 'cause I'm not becoming irrdeemable fast enough here!
Can't have a horror story without Blueblood, or someone like him. You know, the kind of character who seems to have no purpose other than to do as much as possible to deserve his inevitable death before it happens.
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well alicorns are some kind of gods so twi may have use for his soul^^
Great stuff Kaidan. I didn't expect to see the ooze vore, but I'm glad you included it.
Great so far, I hope to see at least some mane6 death before the end too. Actually I'd be great with a complete downer ending as long as there was plenty of brutal vore between now and then.
And now, because no one asked for it, TERRIBLE OUT OF CONTEXT JOKES!
Is there a time her throat isn't Horse?
In other words, an average night in the world of Kaidan, just missing the words "in ecstasy".
Problem thinks has grammar Twilight does. Missing words is yes.
Stallions and gentlemares, I present the mind of every male's hormones ever.
Last chapter:No! I MUST FIGHT THE SPIDERS!
This chapter:No Scootaloo. You ARE the spiders.
And then Scootaloo was a brood mother.
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I think nopony helped her because they assumed that she was on LSD.
3435669 Nonononononono. Oh please God no, NO,NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Relax. It's all photoshop.
3441184 THANK YOU JESUS!!!!!!!!! I think you scared 10 years off of my life. God damn you. lol
Scootaloo is "The Spiderses" now?
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I just thought the picture fit (even though Twilight isn't a mother yet).
3446219 Also, I think her real name was Skyla or something like that.
When I first saw this story I was like: this has got to be a troll fic. There's no way it's what it says it is.
*Reads* Agh!
It is worse than what it claims to be. The horror!
Poor Vinyl.
But you just keep away from Octavia, you hear me! *Cocks shotgun* Don't ya dare touch her, foul beast!
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So Twilight and Fluttershy get digested by Discord, Rarity by Spike, Appplejack and Rainbow Dash still have their fates uncertain, Pinkie Pie will live... good Lord, ponykind is so screwed.
P.S:Please let Twilights last thought be something like "Well, at least i will not be married to Blueblood anymore"
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he's barely a day out of Cloudsdale and already has PTSD.
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"Oh look, Vinyl is flapping around in her own vomit again..."
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I want to have every vore known to man, plus, ooze is sexy.
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note to self: Octavia gets eaten next chapter.
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Nah, Discord would be too easy. I want Twilight to have some extra-special stress relief in the loving embrace of another predator's tummy.
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"Again? It's, like, third time this week..."
3488077 Nooooo, you monster!
I won't let any harm come to her. *Stands in front of Octavia protectively*
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Stress relief...Pinkie Pie trying to eat all of her friends so that they will be together forever, or Princess Celestia returning as an predator and eating her student because Twilight will accept even death if it means escaping from Blueblood.
Prince Blueblood and Princess Twilight, eh?
...i wanted to stop i swear but...something inside of me made me read.more....i dont know what but i. Looking forword to the next chapter
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Not for long.
3531434 Lol what do you mean?
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One of them will get eaten?
Hello.
I was made to read this as a dare (I'm not much into clop) But I must say, while I didn't come for the erotic value, I stayed for the horror value. I mean.. holy crap... the spiders... ugh reminds me of The Mist Some parts sent goosebumps up my neck, and that's a sign of a good story in my book :3
But back to topic, I wish to ask for your permission to write a spin off of this story. You would be given credit for the original work and all, I just need your ok to write it. Thanks for reading!
~scifidude47
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Yeah, feel free to write a spin-off. If not for real-life and snow, I'd have updated by now... I have big plans for Blue Blood next chapter.
And yeah, this one is meant to be more of a horror story. Sex will either be like, a succubi wanting to eat a stallion's soul, or a by-product of powerful neurotoxins causing a mare to orgasm as they asphyxiate.
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Excuse me while I die from lolz. That last sentence though.
Thanks! I'll get to writing it when I can!
Will we get to see how Celestia and Luna were presumably eaten? I hope so!
I'm more into soft vore and I usually don't like to hear/read anything about the digestion part, but this story is good so far.
i want to cum inside spiderloo
This is reminding me of Darren Shan's Demonata, for some reason.
Hands? this is unacceptable, I want a refund.