Sweetie Belle seems like a regular little filly, but nobody can see what she has to go through every day. The constant pressure from school and the lack of understanding from her big sister will soon become too much to handle for her.
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Huskyfan
I live in Austria, I love MLP fanfictions, especially good written sadfics.
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poor sweetie
This story Is great, at the end of the second chapter I was like...
An estimate on when chp 3 will be?
3473794
I'm pretty busy this week and on the weekend, so I guess it will be uploaded next week.
3474158 Thank you!
I'll be honest here. I didn't really like your first story
, but this is really great! 
Keep it up!
3483211
Thank you, I'm glad that you like this story more.
Why is Rarity so mean?!!
No one is mean to sweetie bell!
waaaaaa
I hope Sweetie Belle finds happiness in your fanfic!
It's a good story and all but I'm going to be honest here.
You're rushing this a little bit and Rarity would never act this way towards Sweetie Belle + the grammar in here is a little bad and you space too many sentences.
You really do need a pre-reader for this and fix the personality of Rarity, otherwise this is pretty damn good and it'll hold my thumbs up
She has masochism she relieves emotional pain through physical pain.
This is a horrible way to pass out grades, I hate teachers that do this this sort of thing almost encourages bullying
Very poorly written :( already plotholes and some wordchoises weren't that good. Better study more next time!