A Tale Told Around the Campfire

TBroken Bindings
MLP: FiM
Dark
Horror
Mystery
You've found an "interesting" book recently. You don't know what it is, or why it was hidden in the back of Twilight's library, but you feel so compelled to read it. And keep reading it. And keep reading it...
Gore
Death
Twilight
Celestia
Other
anonpencil · 23k words · 488 12 · 6.9k views
TA Hairier Problem: Rise of the Furball
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
Comedy
Horror
Thriller
Applejack is back to normal and one of the greatest threats in Equestria's history has finally been laid to rest. But if that's the case, then what's going on with Apple Bloom?
Gore
Alt. Universe
Diamond Tiara
OC
Other
Main 6
CMCs
BlueBastard · 185k words · 377 9 · 6.1k views
MDamned Are the Guilty
MLP: FiM
Dark
Horror
Tragedy
Twilight has overcome many opponents. But now she faces an antithesis of everything she is. He is Frank Castle. Her greatest foe.
Gore
Crossover
Human
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Celestia
Other
Main 6
Tirek
Onomonopia · 57k words · 843 101 · 8.1k views
MJustice of the Grave
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
Horror
After a local do gooder is killed, chasing after a mugger, he is visited by an unexpected entity... One who has use of such a noble soul, to protect a besieged Equestria, not as a Human... But as something much stronger, an Elder Lich.
Gore
Sex
Anthro
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Other
Main 6
CMCs
King Sombra
Sunset Shimmer
The-Black-Knight · 8.8k words · 132 15 · 2.9k views
TNo Time to Scream
MLP: FiM
Dark
Comedy
Horror
The world is in turmoil, Equestria is on its knees, monsters hide at every corner and everypony is trapped by the physical manifestation of their innermost fears. But Rarity isn't going to let such trivial occurrences stop her from delivering gifts.
Gore
Rarity
Celestia
Other
Main 6
Equimorto · 2k words · 120 2 · 2.2k views
MThe Power of the Equinox
MLP: FiM
Dark
Horror
Sad
Succumbing to a dark power that threatens to consume her, Twilight must save her friends and Canterlot from the invading Changeling forces. How far would you go for Revenge?
Gore
Violence
Death
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Celestia
OC
Other
Main 6
Shaded Blood · 137k words · 588 33 · 7.6k views
TThe Creepypasta Ponies
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
Horror
The Mane Cast and others must survive various creepypastas in order to safely get home.
Gore
Crossover
Alt. Universe
OC
Other
Main 6
CMCs
Shadowed Rainbow · 29k words · 314 15 · 8k views
MMaleficus Victoria Tome One: The Age of Crusades
MLP: FiM
Romance
Dark
Horror
Some things do NOT match. Oil and Water, Oil and Fire, Alcohol and Bets, and Alcohol and Magic. Sad to say, was it the latter two combinations that occured one fateful night when a sad man goes to a bar for and meets a sad, and strange, woman.
Sex
Gore
Human
Alt. Universe
Celestia
OC
Nightmare Moon
Other
Self Insert
Staadnauthursil · 615k words · 735 50 · 12k views

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MisterNick #1 · Sep 10th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I think that this story has a lot of potential honestly. I like the Friday the 13th part 2 and The Grey vibe I got off of it. Some of the descriptions are pretty neat too.

When you say that you didn't really edit the story, it shows and it really does need it. The very beginning is fairly general so, what I might suggest (if you decide you want to re-work it) is put your timber wolf campfire story up front. You could even pull the Friday the 13th part 7 beginning with the whole, "There's a legend in these parts," type of story. Then, once the story is done the other characters can react however, they need to react and through those reactions we get some insight into their characters.

From there on out it should be much easier to accomplish what you want to have happen in as much gory detail as you want it to happen.

I wish you all the best!

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