Fate has plans for Equestria's new arrival Ike. This seemingly peaceful world will eventually pit him against one of its greatest evils. In the end Ike will either find the resolve to save Equestria. Or to doom it. Power has a price.
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OK, I am going to Feminist Hell for finding this chapter funny.
That being said... I find it hard to believe that the avatar of chaos is going to be so thrown by a little gender bending. I also think he wouldn't have quite such stereotypical reactions to the situation... I mean the whole "I'm being raped and I'm so ashamed that I like it" thing is really, really common in porn. Given that Celestia's not herself, he wanted her anyway, and he's helpless, I'd think Discord would be the type to make wiseass remarks and try to psych himself into enjoying it, because what's much more humiliating for the god of chaos than being raped would be being seen as unable to roll with the punches and adapt to circumstances. Yes, he'd obviously be frightened and upset and humiliated, but to me he seems more likely to try to convince himself this isn't so bad than to dwell on the fact that his body is betraying him... after all, if he can manage to convince himself that this is just a kinky sexual experiment that isn't working out real well rather than that the mare he loves is torturing and humiliating him, he can probably spare himself some of the psychological damage. Discord seems like the kind of guy who, when things go wrong, pretends he meant to do that. You actually have an element of that in there when he says "A long time from now we may look back on this and laugh".
It's difficult to pull off, because you have to walk a fine line between letting the readers think *you*, the author, are okay with it, and making it clear that the character is pretending to themselves to be okay with it, when you do something like that with a rape scenario... but sometimes you get stuck in situations like that when you're writing something that basically never happens to the kind of character you're having it happen to. You can't fall back on standard tropes because the character is so very, very far from "normal" in the way he behaves and reacts to things, and standard tropes are based on what more "normal" people might be expected to think and feel.
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At least you somewhat enjoyed it? Quote: "OK, I am going to Feminist Hell for finding this chapter funny."
It was after all my first ever attempt at both gender swap and a rape scenario. Probably should have just stuck with one unknown instead of two.
But my biggest reasoning behind Discord's actions would have to be the fact that he has literally been stripped of his powers; something that majorly defines him.
I see all of your recent works have Discord as one of the major characters, so its fair to assume that you have a great deal of respect for the Character. Perhaps If I ever have a Discord segment in a future work Ill run it past you.(I don't have any in mind at the moment.)
(And if you didn't see my other comments, this story is already complete and has been posted elsewhere for nearly a year. I am currently editing for grammar and other things before posting it.)
Just so you know, I enjoyed it immensely. Many a time I have read mlp clop that is warm and loving. Rarely do I find anything with Celestia and Discord in such a passionately evil side chapter as this was. Oh, and it is Discord's fault bc he did ask for a second and longer chapter. I know that this comment is coming weeks late, but I hope that you see it soon and feel the large amount of praise I am giving you for such an excellent chapter in what is turning out to be one of the greatest mlp clop fictions I have ever read. Thank you so much.
Avid FimFiction reader.
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