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Velvet has invited her old friend Condor over to her estate for an afternoon visit. But not is quite as it seems when a very strange companion he brings with him divulges what is just the 'tip of the iceberg' of a secret about Velvet's old friend.
An idea I had that I just don't have the inspiration to make into a full sized story. So I made it a short one.
However, I have given lexomancer permission to re-work this concept in his own story Love Untouchable for any that might be interested. I think he actually did a better job of writing it, if I'm to be honest.
Chapters (1)
Woah!
That was...just...wow. Yes wow is a perfect description. You have a gift.
One question, was
supposed to be in the text?
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that was something I was supposed to remove. It was a remnant of a technique I used for breaking down a scene to re-work it. Thank you for catching it.