My life has always been a living hell. It started as a kid when my father would beat me daily to remind me what he would do if I misbehaved. My father was a very cruel pony, who tried to have total control over everypony who came his way, especially towards me and my mother. Thinking back now my mother was a kind woman who would sneak me food and water, talk with me in the late nights while I cried in pain and just, in general, give me enough love to keep me going. Until the day came that "IT" happened. ....................................................................,........................................
"You stupid bitch."
" I couldn't let her starve you ungrateful ..."
*SMACK*
"I told you she was not to be fed and you fed her!"
"And you would have let her starve to death!"
That was just a bit of what I heard while locked in my room. What I heard maybe an hour later was extremely horrifying.
"You dumb bitch, I'LL FUCKING KILL YOU!"
" NOO please put that down please!" * THUMP THUMP THUMP*
" NOW GET THE FUCK UP OFF THE FLOOR AND MAKE ME SOME DAMN FOOD!"
"Dad I-I think you killed her."
"What the FUCK did you just say to me!"
"I said I think you killed her dad, and you did kill her, YOU FUCKING MONSTER!" ....................................................................,........................................
What happened after that was Pinkamena killed her father using a knife she carried with her to check on her mother. Pinkamena then repeatedly stabbed her father to let out years worth of anger and frustration and abuse. She then went and checked on her mother, and broke down in sobs when Pinkie saw her, she was in a pool of blood ( a mix of her and her husband's) and motionless. It was at that moment she realized her father had killed her, not her mother but Pinkamena Dianne Stone. It was also at that moment when she smiled for the first time (for the fact she ended her miserable life) and it was a genuine smile. At that moment she earned her cutie mark.
What. The. Buck. Did I just read.
I cannot comprehend this. I must reread the last part. *le read*
My God. I cannot believe this... this glorious thing that has been presented before my eyes. A little lacking on the details side (how did she get out of her room...?), but it makes up for it with it's... feely-ness, if you do a dramatic reading in your head. Hats off to you, friend.
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I had thought of putting detail into it but think of it this way I gave you a wonderful gift. I'll let you fill in the details with what you want. Whatever you think happened it did. That way if people don't like a certain thing in the story they can change it to the way that makes them understand the story. Just think on that.
3799345 Yus~
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Do the loopholes make sense to you now?
3800206 yesh
How does a balloon associate with murder? Or did she throw a 'happy murder!' Party?
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i was going with her original cutie mark and she was gladly murdering her father so the balloons represent her happiness.
4126343 Ah, ok then. That makes sense.