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some weird guy


Just a guy with an over-active imagination!

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Comet is a colt that just wants to take a moment to breathe. He just finished a contract for a corrupt Somareian military group and is expecting some nice time off to relax and recharge his batteries. Too bad none of his plans ever seem to go the way he wants them to. With conflict arising from both foe and friend alike, he'll have to find a way to face his demons, both new and old, to make it out of his newest and most dangerous contract yet.

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The first of my "brain children," it is also my first shot at fanfiction (ever)! That being said, I urge you to not only read, but heavily criticize! If you liked it: why? If you didn't: again why? Just give me some feedback, is all I ask. Tags will be added as necessary, some minor language, yada yada yada... Oh! Oh, oh, oh! I also don't have an editor or anyone, really, that I can run these through before posting them, so be prepared for that! This is starting to get a little long, so I'll just say: I hope you like this and have as much fun reading as I did making it up!



What? Are you still here? Go read already!

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 3 )

>Dark starlight

Hmmm... Now you've got my brain churning up ideas! This can either be hilariously good :pinkiehappy:... or ridiculously bad:facehoof:...

Whelp, thanks to my slow ass, I didn't get to catch the guy that "thumbs downed" me! Darn!

I'll git you next time... :ajbemused:

Nah, Immajustakidden! I actually wanted to get their input on what they thought! I'm not mad; rather, i'm curious and pleased! :twilightsmile: This means I have room to improve (no durr) on my literature.

So if you're reading this, thumbs down guy--or anyone really--I would really appreciate some feedback as to what you think. :duck:

What did you like? What didn't you like? How can I improve?

C'mon, help a bruthuh out! :facehoof:

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