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Star Saber


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An unknown Earth Pony mare with no memories. A stallion whose been alone for years. An evil being that has no business other than destroying an entire race. When the elements of harmony are long dead and the elements themselves hidden away in another form, what will it take to destroy an entity that is invincible to normal means? Even the Princesses have no idea what or where it came from. All that is known is that the Stallion must find four more like him, ponies that have no business being alive, with swords that can speak, and a hidden bond between them and this Mare with no memories. What drives them to this end? And just what does the Mare have to do with it all?
OCxApplebloom, Sex because it's going to have some, Gore because...self explain. If you don't like talking swords or strangeness don't read.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 29 )

This sounds good! I can't wait to read t, after I finish the story I'm reading now. Until then, you've earned a like & fave!

3376321 Thank you. For a first I hope this does well. I'm not really a good writer, so this will be good for me. :twilightsheepish:

Witness the tale of a Mysterious Mare, who has lost her past and knows nothing of herself,
And her brave stallion companion, who also knows nothing about her,
as they travel the lands in search of something they forgot to remember!

3389254 Pretty much. Only in this case...only the Mare has lost her memory. Not the Stallion, and he's more of a protector than a companion.

3389266
Really?
I was trying to bait you into giving me more information on the plot,
But if its really as simple as my silly description i guess ill read something else.

3389282 I was merely confirming a more minor detail. Trust me. There's a ton more that's going to be going on than just that. I'm not easily baited and I saw it for what it was. :rainbowlaugh:

3389933
Curses!!!
he saw through my evil master plan....
*Looks at his master plan check list*
Step 1. Confuse the writer for no apparent reason,
Step 2. ...
Step 3. Profit!!!
*Crumples up the check list and tosses it away*
Oh well it was a good plan while it lasted...

3394298 You'll just have to watch and read like everyone else.
*Begins reading own evil checklist.*
*Wring hands evilly knowing what's going to happen*
"Failed at evil laugh and sounds insane instead*:pinkiecrazy:

3394307
This story needs changelings,
But to be fair every story needs changelings.
What?Me?Well if you insist!
*Jumps in the story and throws muffins at everyone while yelling...*
I Am, The Muffin Man!!!!

3394323........Possibly.......not going to toss the idea right then and there....but it might be possible....I don't know yet....or do I? :derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpytongue2:

3394329
Really?
And here i was joking.
But go ahead and put The Muffin Man in your story if you really want too.:pinkiehappy:

3394347 Not the Muffin Man...but some changelings....who knows though....oh yeah....I do :ajsmug:

3394435
Oh...well i was just making sure.

3394442 Yeah I know...so all in all what do you think so far of this? :applejackunsure:

3394447
Well ive kinda been busy playing comment tag with about 20 people,
But il read through it right now and give you my opinion.

3394456
Ummm....
Well.....
*Doesnt like hurting feelings*
I'll umm get back to you on that opinion when more of the story is out.

3394625 Yeah I know it's going to need to be fleshed out...no hurt feelings here man. Just want an overall opinion of it so far before I actually start getting into the story and actually hitting the ball with this. No worries, its only the beginning and to be fair...I did warn of strangeness...as for Alamante, it's not my work. Check out The Adventure of the Elementals by AutoKnight, his country his story, I'm just doing something with it.

3394654
Well if you want my opinion,
Bad, but not terrible,
Deffinantly shows potiental.
Sorry i cant give you a more well written judgement,
but im just a silly changeling who like to comment randomness.

3394674 Better than nothing...also I'm reading a story about a changeling....how did you disconnect from the hive? :rainbowhuh: Are you a SPY??? :rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh:

3394718
If your asking about Soft Shell the character,
His backstory is a very sad one involving death, loneliness, and insanity brought on by psycological trauma.

And there goes the randomness.... crap....:rainbowderp:

That was a nice and creative chapter.

~Unseen

3411024 Well thank you! I'm doing my best on this, sorry for being inconsistent with posting..it takes awhile for my meager brain to come up with all new ways to up the ante I give myself

3414123
All that matters is that you have fun with what you are doing!

~Unseen

Interesting. Keep on writing. And are those six leaders who abandoned them who I think they are?

3466274 Well....Maybe.....Who knows what the future may hold Auto? I'm writing as it hits me....but let your mind think on it. This is set in the same 'verse as yours thanks to your wonderful inspiration of the Elementals and your permission to use the country and such, which again I thank you for. :ajsmug:

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