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Charpter 3 here I come!
Ah Man........I want to talk to her,,,OR ROB HER!?!?!
DAMN!
I want to ask 4 sex NOW!
WELL this story is pretty fucking ENTERTAINING
so I'm going to track this.
"I'm not one for these silly 'pick-up games'. If you want sex, just ask."
right ther dude.
Damn Rainbow Dash is one of those "one-night stand" girls. Me gusta
Intriguing... I don't think I've seen a choose-your-own-adventure story on FIMfiction before.
Well if only i havent found this before it was finished xD
But sadly.....I cannot do those cruel things to AppleBloom, she is just TOO cute.
I guess I'll give her the bits.
I was considering attempting to write one of these, however I know how hard they are to write, and how dodgy they can be. You also need to release chapters very quickly.
Good attempt though, however this seems a bit 2D, perfectly planned out, with nothing going wrong and the story advancing so quickly.
Umm, kidnap her!
Really!
If you're gonna be evil, don't be half assed about it!
You should add a path about raping the knocked out mare.
300513
Uhh.... I don't think I'm evil enough to write a rape scene.
300513.......Teach me master.
294475
And now you can. Enjoy!
Hah, rape scene.
I am going with let her sleep.
DAMN! Having sex with Dash was AWESOME!
Hmm....Rarity or Twilight.....I'm going with Rarity my good man
303510 All you need is a cup of power,
Add it to the mix!
The pretend to be sweet,
Not sour,
A bit of experience,
Just a pinch!
Being evil is such a sinch,
Add a whole ton of deception,
Add a lot more,
And you count to four,
And you never get suspected!
Murder!
So quick and easy
Murder!
Drain their blood 'till they're pasty
Murder murder murder!
Ummmm...
You brought up D&D.
I learned how to be evil in D&D.
And trust me, I learned from the best.
Therefore, I would like to borrow my friend Kyle's practically invincible characters.
And, I say practically because they can be killed. They have to be frozen in a glacier, dragged across planes to the elemental plane of fire, and dumped in a volcano to finally kill them.
And they can't be disarmed.
Wow.....lame. Rainbow said I was lame.....THATS WHY I CHOSE THE OTHER CHOICE 4 SEX!
Guess I'll go to Sweet apple Acres then.
Imma go to sweet SAA.
Then use the farm tools to go on a murder spree.
Also, I don't want to sleep in a barn. A nice pile of warm intestines will do.
310218
Uh.... this is getting kind of dark.... even though we're talking about ponies....
310561 nah, this isn't dark.
This is light grey for me.
And red. Damn blood stains...
310600
I'm... just... going to... go hide in my closet... for the next... 49 years...
310744 Ummm...
If you don't like dismembered elves, don't go in your closet.
Just some friendly advice.
COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you have to continue with this
Go Assasins Creed style.
327414 Hidden blade up the tailpipe? Jump into a chicken coop? Get murdered by french legions after they impede your progress of closing a gate for the SIXTEEN HYPERBILLILIONTH TIME?!
Why yes, I did hate Brotherhood.
330541: With you saying that.......I am amused by your failure.
330799 That game has no fucking clue how to handle checkpoints.
330844: heh....agreed.
When all chapters are done i'm going to be so evil....
ALMOST RAPE!!!!!!!
Ughhh.
Amateurs...
How to kidnap people:
Step 1. Knock them the buck out
Step 2. Drag them into an alleyway
Step 3. Tie 'em up and gag 'em
Step 4. Do whatever the buck you want!
Step 5. ????????
Step 7. Profit
347159
I'll uh... keep that advice in mind...
346845
You really want a rape scene, don't you?
347370: No, I just wanted to point that there was ALMOSt going to be rape there, that is all
347351 YOU DAMN WELL BETTER!!!!!!
347370 oh, and,
Icanhazrapebowdashpl0x?
347786 HAHAHA! Dude, WTF
!
347381
Hey, look. Another ALMOST rape scene.
351213: OH SNAP!
351213: That pic up there..............D'WAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!
351224
Wow, only 3 minutes and you commented on the story. Impressive. Now, go share my story and spread it around, my puppet! Free Rainbow Dash's if you do!
351232: I ain't your Puppet!
But fine....I'll go spread around....WITH PM'S!!!!
351232 Oh, but dear...
You're my puppet!
351504
Why do I believe that?
351524 Ummm....
Yes?
Awwwwww.....I would NEVER make Fluttershy cry
.....
And Yes I DID take the pic and used it as my Avatar.
358437
You son of a...
358705: YEAH.....what are you going to do about it?
