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Zippidey
I am 14 years old and I write fanfic to contribute to the fandom. :)
Zippidey
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283794 Thank you. This is my first fan fic and I think its turning out better than I thought. I am currently writing the 3rd chapter so it will hopfully be out by the end of the day.
maybe give chance *track*
wat happened she she passed out but how
284173 you will just have to wait until next chapter..
Good story. I'll see where you go with this.
Man this guy needs to tone down his swag
287212 what do you mean?
287221
Most likely cause just about every mare that seen him goes in this 'love shock.' I just hope poor Fluttershy doesn't get it.
this guy is a chick magnet
290051 Ah darn... thats what I was planning!
nah, not really lol
first! also cool story bro also dis nigra got swag
Good chapter and...
First!
that was... different
Hey there, I just thought I'd say thanks for the shout-out in the fic's description! I honestly wasn't expecting that and it made my day, even if that sounds odd. Also, reading the chapter now, I notice that I missed an error or two, and just that makes me feel like a failure as an editor. (crawls into depression-corner and curls into fetal position) Heh, just kidding. Regardless, I DID miss a mistake or two that I should have corrected. I promise I'll do better next time!
Your fan, and hopefully still your editor,
HallowedGuru
307808 no thank you. Without you I would have even MORE mistakes. I don't expect a flawless story becaus i can't even produce one! I'm just glad that I have someone who likes my work so much that they will take time out of their day to help me. You have no idea what it means to me, to all my fans. Thank you.
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You're welcome. You saying that makes me feel great. I love your story and it's great that I get to help you out with it, and I like the feeling of being useful. I look forward to pre-reading and editing future chapters. Let me know if you plan on writing any other stories, because I'll gladly edit and help you out with those too.
This might just be me, rather than an actual problem, but perhaps having a more significant indent at the beginning of each paragraph would be nice. If you don't want to do that, that's okay, but I find it easier to read when the paragraphs are more noticeably separated. Either way, it's a good story. Keep it up.
Hiw i=often do you make new?
*How often do you make new chapeters?
343092 I use to about every other day but this one is taking me a while. Sorry I hope to have it up sometimes this week. Again I apologize.
You should really pile up the chapters a bit more instead of making them so short. Just a quick tip
Oh and btw... With the scene coming up... my only reaction is
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This GIF is amazing. How have I never seen it before? Whatever, I'm nabbing it for future use.
365354 Already used it on my facebook. Got a shit ton of likes. I used it for a post about the hunger games. btw it was AWESOME
365354
Search "dis gon b gud gif" on google images. Its brilliant
Suck it AJ!
Oh wait you can't! 
On a serious note: great chapter
My face when reading new description:
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Really, I'm best pony?
That's awesome of you to say!
Also, thanks for using my ideas!
370728 Yeah but I didnt end up going to fluttershys "shed"(lol) because I thought that he doesn't really know her and doesn't know where she lives so he might as well just mindlessly run into the woods!
Of course! That's always the best course of action to take! Run into the woods! It's not mindless at all because nothing bad EVER happens in the woods at night. Nope! No sir! Not ever!
371540 I'm pretty sure its like 2 in the afternoon but I get what your saying lol.
At first i was like "Dafuq?"
And at the end I was like "CRAZY BITCH APPLEJACK MODE!"
hmmmm, if i where in his position id go FOR A THREE WAY
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heheheheh, by the time im done they'd see cross eye
yay it is finally here
"Fashionably late" Sureeeee it was. Worth the wait.
heheheheh nice start
Awww why is this on hiatus?