The Misadventures of Blazing "Inferno" Justice

by Blazing Justice

Meet the Parent [Edited]

Author's Note: I'm so sorry for the long periods in between chapters. I'm writing a 5 page paper right now, and I need to do that stuff first. On with the story! :P

As I wake, I find that I am in a soft, comfortable bed. "Ooh... Cushy..." I say softly.
"You're finally awake, then." I turn my head to see Midnight staring out the window. I crane my neck to see that it is, in fact, the middle of the night.
"How long was I out? And where are we?" I ask Midnight.
"About... six hours? Seven? I don't really know. And we're at your place." She answers, still looking out the window.
"Okay... What are you staring at?" I ask her, trying to see for myself.
She turns and smiles a bit before she answers. "Look for yourself."
I get up and walk to the window. When Midnight moved, the curtain shifted into place. Where a normal pegasus would have used a their wing, I used a hoof to move the curtain. "Wow, the sky is beautiful tonight."
"Indeed, it is. By the way, why didn't you just use your wings to open the curtain?" She asks quizzically.
I sigh, "Because I can't..." I whisper, barely audible.
"What?"
"Because I can't! Okay!" I shout at her.
"Woah... Sorry... I just wanted to know..." She says apologetically.
"No, no. I'm sorry. I shouldn't have shouted." I say, just as Rhino enters the room.
"What's going on in here?" Rhino asks out of breath, as if he ran in here. "Midnight, did you ask him about his wings?" Rhino asks.
"Yeah... I didn't know it was such a touchy subject..." She replies, looking at the floor.
Rhino sighs and says, "Come with me, Midnight. Blaze, Atom is downstairs with Sapphire. I believe you want to talk to them?" Rhino says, leading Midnight out of the room.
"Oh, yeah." I reply.
"Sorry again, Blaze." Midnight says before exiting the room. I nod to signify that it's fine.
I walk downstairs to see Atom and Sapphire sitting on the couch side by side. Situations like this require coffee. "Before we begin, is there any coffee?" I ask.
"Yeah. In the kitchen." Atom replies.
"Thanks." It takes me a few minutes to find the kitchen, seeing as I was unconscious when I got here. Fresh coffee is brewed. It must be dawn, or somepony made me coffee. Yeah, option A is better. Now that I got my coffee, I walk back to the living room. "So, Atom, nice to see you buddy." I say, to get started.
"Definitely. And I believe you already know Sapphire." Atom replies.
"Uh... Yeah. Long time, no see sis." I say awkwardly.
"Mhmm." She hums, staring at the floor.
"What's wrong?" I ask her.
"Hm? Oh, nothing. I had a question, is all." She says.
"Well? What is it?" I ask he, puzzled.
"I know we just met for the first time in ages, but I'm down a singer and need a replacement for the concert tomorrow. Would you like to help out?" She asks.
"Gladly." I say with a smile.
"I knew I could count on you!" She says as she rushes up off of the couch and hugs me. I hug her back and whisper in her ear, "I still can't fly, by the way. Can you teach me later?"
"Sure. I thought you wouldn't learn, living with Rhino." She whispers back.
"How do you know about that?" I ask, pushing myself out of the hug. "Did you know where I was this whole time?! And you didn't come to see me, or give me advice, or even tell me that you were alive?!" I shout, feeling frustration and anger beginning to boil.
"No. I only heard bits and pieces of a student prodigy in Princess Celestia's personal school thirteen years ago. Then, when I met Atom, he told me about you. But I never believed him until I saw you for myself." She says earnestly.
"Then why didn't you talk to me in the park?! I recognized you, but couldn't figure it out." I say.
"I was... scared. I didn't want to make a mistake thinking it was you, but being wrong." She says, pawing at the carpet.
"Okay. I guess it's fine..." I say, taking a breath. "...but let's talk outside for a moment. I need to say something private." I glance at Atom, who in turn nods.
"Fine." Sapphire says. We walk outside, into the backyard. "What's up?" She asks.
"It's about mom. She didn't die, did she?" I ask.
She takes her time answering, and sighs. "No. She didn't. Spark Flare is fine too."
Spark Flare is alive? I need to see her. "Have you seen her?"
"Not lately. But I do know that she wants to see you, ASAP." As she says this, a bright flash interrupts the conversation. "Ah!"
"Son, Daugher. We have much to discuss." Princess Celestia says to us, as we bow to our mother. "Rise, children. I do not expect you to treat me like the others do." We stop bowing, and I smirk at my mother.
"Long time, no see, Mom." I say. She just smiles softly at me. "Come inside, we have refreshments." I lead her inside, where we see Atom sipping lemonade. "Did you make that?"
"Yeah." He finally looks at us, and his shades fall right off his face. "Princess Celestia! You're majesty!" He bows hastily.
"Haha! Atom, meet our mother, Princess Celestia." Sapphire says, smiling softly at our mother.
"Mother?! Are you serious?! Why didn't you ever tell me, Sapphire?" He says while he stands from bowing.
"Dunno. But pick up your shades, they could get scratched." She says, as Atom picks up his shades.
During their exchange, I snuck behind Atom and am now creeping up behind him. The back door is still open, so I have my escape route. Perfect. Let's do this. I got a wild look in my eyes, and tapped him on the shoulder.
As he turns around, I move my hoof to the right so it's in front of his eyes. I poke his shades, "Boop." I sprint out the door, Atom chasing me with his sword drawn.
"I WILL CUT YOUR WINGS OFF, BLAZING JUSTICE!!" He screams behind me.
"Seventh time this week! I'd like to see you try!" I sprint at full speed through Ponyville, Atom close behind me. Uh oh... I feel myself being tackled to the ground with a something like cold steel on my back. "Atom, come on... Let's not get hasty now..." I whimper.
"Too late, Mr. Royalty. You had your chance." He says, a wild look in his eyes and his mane frazzled.
I gulp, praying silently for a miracle. Suddenly, I see a Rainbow colored blur shoot Atom across the town.
"AHHHHhhhhh..." He yells, his voice fading.
That was weird. Then I feel myself on the ground again, my vision fading to black. And all I can see now is magenta.
"Hey." And into comatose I go...

Author's Note:

In the author's note for chapter 2, I believe... I said that I sing at the concert, eat pie, and nearly get killed by Atom. One of those happened here. Thanks! Leave a like, comment, or if ya feel like it, a Favorite! Cya!

Comments

[Blazing Justice]

3555007 First off, tooke me long enough to look at the comments.

Secondly, I might start doing it in past tense, but that would come with some extra roadblocks

[JoseDaTrumpetGirl]

3656323

This is a pretty cool story! But I can see why people may see it as a self insert because your wife is RD and Mom is Celestia. Oh and if you need help with writing the story in past tence I'd be happy to help!

[Blazing Justice]

3656580 Thank you! I might take you up on that offer

[JoseDaTrumpetGirl]

3656615
Cool! PM me if you need to!

[Atomic Vortex]

TEAM ROCKET'S BLASTING OFF AGAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN!!!
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[Blazing Justice]

3659092

"Yeah Dash! That's my girl!" I say.

"Huh? Your girl?" She says quizzically.

"Oops! That's for the future!" I say, rubbing the back of my head. And that's when Atom got his revenge.

"LEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOYYYYYYYY HOOOOOOOFFKINS!" And from then on, Dash's mane and Atom were nonexistent.

Atom, you like my mom?

[Atomic Vortex]

3676066
I don't understand anything in this comment...

[Blazing Justice]

3676411 Oh... Um...

[Slip Kid]

While I'd say that this is far from the worst story I've read, it still has a few problems:

1. The pacing is a bit too fast for my tastes, so much happens in such a short amount of time.

2. Their mother is Celestia, ruler of Equestria and raiser of the sun. How didn't he know she was alive? Also, anyone who sees that will instantly spring from their seats and start screaming "Gary Stu!" at the top of their lungs; not saying that's what he is, just what some will perceive him as being.

Still, giving it an up-vote because, well... why not?

Are you waiting for word on which story I'd like you to read or have you already read one?

[HiddenUnderACouch]

Alrighty then... This was definitely something interesting. Haven't read OC stories that are not bad in quite a while. But I'll agree with Slip Kid, the pacing gotta be a bit slower.

As for what I would like you to read, I guess this shall be an entertaining read

It's my first story, so we're on even footing here!

[Blazing Justice]

3744074 In all honesty, I don't enjoy stories like those you write, but I'll try the one about Pink Sheep. Seems like the nicest one.

1) Slow the fuck down, got it!

2) In the next chapter, which I hope to get writing soon, it will be explained why he didn't know she was alive.

[Slip Kid]

3744558

Prepare to be surprised.

[Blazing Justice]

3744562

[Slip Kid]

3744564

[Blazing Justice]

3744567

[Slip Kid]

3744569

In all seriousness, that's just about my second darkest fic. My most light-hearted is Beyond the Vale, though it's fairly long so I get it that you may not want to read it. Warning though, Pink Sheep comes with hefty doses of wat

[Blazing Justice]

3744587 *sigh* Alright, let's do this.

[Slip Kid]

3744602

Good luck, soldier.

[Avox]

I'm enjoying this so far. My only major complaint is that the chapters are a little short, but I can get over it.