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Commander Ice


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My name is James. I'm your typical student: I sleep. I do my homework, all that jazz.

But, I mostly love to game. Gaming is my passion.
I have played a wide variety of video games throughout my lifetime. Some, I hate. Some I love. Some I haven't even played yet.

So, when I'm offered to have a chance to become a person in some foreign world, wielding the power of every video game I've ever played, I jumped at the chance.

...What the hell did I get myself into?

(My first, true HiE fic! All criticism welcome!)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 490 )

this will be good can we have a sheogorath part?

Ehm... there's an over-usage of the word 'he' in this story. :twilightoops:

3343144 im eating cheese right now CHEESE FOR EVERYONE! :pinkiecrazy:

Very interesting......I'm keeping an eye on this.

Here is an Idea
Dark Jak and light Jak from the Jak and Daxter series
all you need to do is find a way to use the idea

surprise twist the only game he ever played was pong!

I recall a game called Black & White where you are god.
An idea maybe? :pinkiehappy:

Please, PLEASE, use the shouts from skyrim, and the building of rockets Kerbal Space Program, and the building of minecraft, and the immense magic of WOW, because that would make this story so cool.

this fanfic is my dream come true :pinkiehappy:
Ryan your living my dream don't screw it up

i just realized what if Ryan goes mad with power and is actually the beast :pinkiegasp:

Just letting you know. When another character speaks you need to start a new paragraph.

Heres hoping he played deadpool or neverdead

Wow! I thought I would never see a thir-cond person story, but here it is! Please, observe the cliché as shit edgy hero with no backstory, edgy design. The main part of the story, his gaming powers which come from games he's played, and it explains THREE games. That part is down the unimaginative gutter along with every Marine in Equestria(Not saying this is Marine in Equestria) except Displacement. Maybe I should think deeper about this, after all, it's supposed to be a magical and enchanting adventure! Especially with a more-obvious-than-the-sun love interest who is totally going to come back later for some plot point when you have writers block.

Y'know, maybe I am judging a book by its cover and prologue, and a little harsh too, but you have to understand, the only games it seems it says he's played is Pokémon and shit FPS's. I mean, come on I would have been happy if you shoved in games, shit or no. It would be interesting seeing a godmode Gary-Stu-a-nator that has the powers of Thu'um and can duel wield rapid fire miniguns while casting gigantic magical dragons that shoot dinosaurs from a volcano inside of their mouth. It would be pleasing as it would imply that this is for fun, and not for story, which, may I add, this is lacking in.

Now the plot, the plot is about as good as the CoD franchise, take that as you will, and it implies sillyness, not some hardcore story with gut wrenching terror, and a Twilight-esque love scene somewhere. Just saying 'All the ponies were killed by a gigantic fucking monster, and I expect you to handle it, alone' is about as bullshit as saying Adam Sandler can 'act'.

Overall it's a big spaghetti fest, where shit is just rolling where it pleases, and you're sitting atop the biggest meatball, observing the shitstorm.

Tl;dr: Fuck you for looking here.

Oh sweet Jesus didn't you play The Mask recently?

Cliched as fuck? Yes. BUT. Your Grammar, Punctuation and format is basically making love to my eyes right now. I will take a chance with this. You have my attention.

Let's see here... My list of game(s) franchise(s) expected to be referenced within this story:

God of War.....................................................Kingdom Hearts
Pokemon........................................................Final Fantasy
Naruto Shippuden..........................................Super Mario Bros.
Sonic the Hedgehog.......................................Red Dead Redemption
Elder Scrolls...................................................Jak and Daxter
Fallout............................................................Far Cry
Witcher...........................................................Guitar Hero
Assassin's Creed............................................Metal Gear Solid
DDO................................................................Hitman
WoW...............................................................Warhammer 40K
LoL..................................................................Wolf Among Us
Ascend: Hands of Kul......................................Last of Us
Might & Magic: Clash of Heroes.......................State of Decay
Command & Conquer......................................Battlestations: Midway
Dishonored......................................................Minecraft
Alan Wake.......................................................Half-Life

3344027 I just needed a way to get the ball rolling. I'm sorry, I was never really good at making introductions to things, but I try. It's not the best, obviously, but it's not the worst either.

Also, yes, I am fully aware that I made him introduce little to no games in the first chapter, and yes, I am fully aware of the amount of 'god-like beings' there are in video games, but I refuse to make him an immortal. And, I refuse to make him an overpowered man that constantly screams "Fuck you! I have immortality and power!" He will not be waving his power around as he pleases, and he will not be a perfect character.

Love interest? For this story? No. He will not be getting involved with any of the mares. Scratch that: he will not get involved with anyone. I don't care if they want him, he will not become a guy who falls in love with anyone. That'd be boring for what I have planned for this story.

And if I do get writers block? I'll have to think of something then. No love interest or shit like that, I'll do something else. What? No clue. But no love in this story.

I hope that this will answer some questions for you. :twilightsmile:

Oh, I'm defiantly gonna see where this one goes. Interest peaked!:pinkiehappy:

Ryan stared at her in fascination as she radiated the solar energy. Suddenly, he felt an odd sensation in his toe, slowly travelling up his leg, to his knees, to his stomach, to his arm pits and, finally, engulfing his head.

The toe is his only weakness...:pinkiecrazy:

This might or might not go to my favorites permentaly.
I'll see next chapter.

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

I await a person who is more stronger than a god :twilightsmile:

3343747 And then a pony who looks remarkably like Cole MacGrath kills him using a device like the RFI. :rainbowlaugh:

This story has great potential . . .

I shall watch this.

the noise this guy makes when he wakes up

I just got to the part with Harley, and I am officially accusing you of stalking me.
I've played games my whole life, it's the one thing I have any passion for. I have one female friend who actually gets me. I am hilarious when I want to be. I find FPS games boring, with few exceptions. I even had a dog named Harley back when I was a kid, and by imaginary God it was the saddest day of my life when he died.
I will admit there are a few deviations, such as having feelings for another human (never happened, I actually friendzoned 4 girls because I just didn't give a damn), I don't need corrective lenses, and Harley was a Corgi-Chow mix (and damn was that stubby tail adorable).

So yeah. You wrote down over half my life's story and I'm not even halfway through yet. :trixieshiftleft:I'll be watching this...

This story would end in one massive battle
D&D 3.5 True Resurrection. plus Miracle/wish to boost Celestia. throw in necromancy and contingency Resurrection.
To kill the enemy go Implosion, Wail of the Banshee, Weird, Flesh to Stone, Wish (Stone Shatter), Black Blade of Disaster, Wish (Teleport to the Positive energy plane), Imprisonment , Miracle (Destroy enemy)
if all else fails: Epic level spell (maximized Vengeful Eye of God=1830 damage to enemy (enough to kill pretty much any god) and 1200 to self)
after the enemy is dead: Soul bind, sequester on sapphire, greater teleport sapphire to outer space.
Please point out any obvious flaws I have made.

Typo in your description; it should be "a wide variety of video games"

3345651
Just... shaddup! You're giving me too much nostalgia!
BTW, favorited just to read later.

Comment posted by afterceasetoexist deleted Nov 18th, 2013

but wasn't sure wether or not

Whether

"My name is Princess Celestia. I am the ruler of said world

Oh come on, you put her in, without a horn, just say Pincipal Celestia:trollestia:

we have blown it up, shot it, stabbed it, but it refuses to die

Shot it

With arrows right? Right?

a unicorn name Twilight Sparkle

Named.

Lets see... Powers to have... Prototype... Dark Souls (Insanity is a problem however)... Phoenix Wright... Alan Wake...

And Spyro. Nothing will touch you.

I will be looking forward to the rest of this story :pinkiehappy:

Eh... I'll give it a shot. But do you think it would be too much trouble to separate when a person talks into their own paragraph? Please?

It's okay! :pinkiehappy: As long as you knew it happened hehe. Now I sound like a grammar nazi :ajsleepy: 3346953

And the story ends in one short chapter after a single "Falcon Punch". :trollestia:

God-moding to this extent is not amusing.

I am tempted to write a farce of this where it's some 65-year old obese guy who has never played anything other than 'Pong'.

:trollestia::trollestia:

3344350 might and magic? But... isnt.. that old?

also... you forgot one more power...

Become a killer, a monster, a god.

Feel the power of...

THE PROTOTYPE

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May god have mercy on anyone he meets...

Someone will get a stick up their ass if there aren't any Wrath of Asura or Warhammer (*cough*Sanguinius*cough*) parts in this story.

Also, for those who doesn't know who Sanguinius is...
I present to you...
*drum roll*
Mr. Surpreme butt rape of butt rapey-ness...

Primarch. Sanguinius!
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also, Horus is a douche bag

All he really needs is the power of Prototype then he is pretty much invincible to everything...

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